The initial concept and execution of the story were interesting... Then the author went down the usual collection path ft rinnegan and tailed beasts. Made impossible hookups to girls despite the situation and basically ruined his own story before turning it into a breeding fic in the end. I liked the idea of someone not going the usual doujutsu for a change but that never lasted. Then the quality of the story kept degrading and in the end. The story was just.... Pointless...
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