this seems quite interesting, but it does not look like a first chapter but more like a blurb on the back of a book to make people interested. but it does make me want to read more
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Sorry, it was something I spat a few months back. In about 2 to 3 months my exams will finish so then I can rework the whole thing.
I wasn't complaining i was just giving my view on it. hope you do well on your exams though