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Learning about the Indian culture from a narrative story is trully fascinating. Since in the first place, world history thoroughly sparks my interest... and somewhat I could relate myself with the MC because of that. The world background is overwhelming and the story is well-written. I don't see that much mistakes. But since it's supposed to be a novel, it would be better not to dump manifold informations about the said memoir and instead, insert them in various chapters as it goes on. It will really thrill readers to binge more. Although, I didn't seem to have any problem of all those since I usually spend amount of my time reading historical related books... which was way hard to understand than any of the works I read like yours. I will read more of this story and put my heart into it. Thanks for the daily usage! I'll support this book no matter what.
Born Again
RenuKakkar
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I think it's okay. You can turn down a little information since those details from the first chapter are relevant for the story. But it would be great to soften the pace through and add more immersion for the MC for all of that. Well, that's my thoughts. But still, the story was so damn interesting and thoughtfully unique. It's a great piece indeed.
RenuKakkar:Thank you. I had removed a lot of information from the first few chapters and shifted it to later ones. Maybe the first chapter needed to be amended more.