Review Detail of Chainslock in Born Again

So far, so good. The writing quality is good; informative, and almost void of errors—however, one must remember to “show” not “tell”. It’s one of the critical things a writer must do in order for the reader to be engaged and relate to the characters. I strongly suggest to strengthen dialogues so we will be able to “feel” the characters. Overall, great job. Keep up the good work.