Review Detail of ZephyrIsMe in Born Again

I am no really good at advising about grammar and the like as I am also not good at it. But I found there are some typos in your novel and wrong use of an article like for example, an year, should be 'a year'. Also, it is my opinion but there is too much information about Max Muller that has not many impacts on your story. Hope this is helping you in making you a better writer. Ps: Please don't take my review as negative and take it to your heart. Your novel is only three chapters and it can develop more.