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RenuKakkar
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2020-02-27 04:15

Hi everyone. I am shamelessly promoting my novel. This time I am writing a small novel. It is about a girl of mixed race (Indian father and Russian mother) who comes to India to meet her grandparents. She also wants to know why she has recurring dreams about certain temples and forts. It is something neither the doctors in Russia nor the doctors in India are able to help her with. Please support with your comments and suggestions and ratings etc.

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As far as immersion goes, full marks from me. It is not the type of story that I would generally be interested in reading (at least not yet) but I find myself genuinely interested in the story. Writing Quality - 5/5 It has set up a great atmosphere for the story where the world seems surreal and a bit uneven. This makes the attention to detail by the author extenuate on the realistic part of it while the thing with dreams builds up the semi-realistic-semi-fantasia part of it. Therefore, even if it's not done directly, I feel like the world-building so far is the most impressive aspect of the story. World Background - 5/5 That said though, it's not like other aspects aren't good. The protagonist, Tania, is explained well and her family members, while we haven't seen much of them, act like real people do, which does add a lot to them. This sets up a great base for further character development. Character Design - 5/5 As far as the story development goes, well, we only have 6 chapters so far and it's good. I don't have any problems with it. I need to read more chapters before actually forming an opinion on it tbh. Story Development - 5/5 I don't know if there's an update schedule or not but it seems like the updates have been uneven. Regardless, I don't want to give you less stars because of something like this. Stability of Updates - 5/5 And there you have it. I am rating this book as high as I can because I enjoyed every aspect of it and have become genuinely interested in reading more. Great work, author! Keep it up!

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