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Review Detail of H_Alex in New Dawn- A Harry Potter Transmigration Fanfic

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In my first review I gave this novel 5 stars. Now I gave it 3. The main reason is author's blind, puppy affection to Hermione, which is shown as recidivist traitor. "Genious" businessman selling stuff for a dirt-chip price to a small community. Breaking the logic of how hard it is to make a permanent charm. Repetitive plot with Hermione's betrayal anf MC's forgiveness. Doing things without considering the effect. MC using the guilt trip card every time(let's be honest, he didn't suffer, real Harry did). All this things and many others slowly but steadily turned me away from this, in other cases good novel. That's just sad.

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New Dawn- A Harry Potter Transmigration Fanfic

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