Review Detail of Pavan1234 in New Dawn- A Harry Potter Transmigration Fanfic
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There are some recent reviews about this novel which criticized this novel for stupid reasons (atleast in my opinion)which have been bothering me. Those reasons are : A) character development of Mc : this is the plot point that I started dislike as I read more novels. These character development for very predictable, for me, as most of the time they done in same ways. They are 1) Inexperienced child Mc facing a lot problems with stupid decisions and misunderstandings to become an experienced(still not smart) *****.(this way is seen in most of shounen stories. So, I got bored by these plots and started to hate and avoid them.) 2)with a sad and tragic backstory of some smart guy Mc with debatable bad quality. (the chances of this way being good and well written are low.) B) Second one is about some guy complaining about how this novel's Mc learning Legilimency without any help from books or teachers and time it took this Mc was too low. Buddy what you're reading are reading is a fictional novel where 99% of times Mc are known to create miracle or make the impossible possible. My advice for above types of complainers, please only read shounen stories ( for a proper character development) for those that need character development and for those that don't want miracles done by Mc in novels, stop reading the novels and live your normal day lives( as in our normal life there will be no one that can make impossible possible). The following features are what I search for in novel : 1) start with a interesting idea. 2) unique Mc (no need for character development). 3) clever and funny character interactions. 4) most of the time fast paced novels attracts me. 5) an proper ending. This is a very quality most novels don't have in Webnovel. I wrote all this because after a long time I am reading a good fast paced harry Potter fanfiction with slightly unique Mc. Please don't discourage the author.
New Dawn- A Harry Potter Transmigration Fanfic
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and he skip everything the reviewer said about the mc should not be able to do magic without people knowing
Chana_Batati:Dude, this section is for to review 'THE BOOK' not the "READERS" . Lol. Criticising readers isn't for You.
Denzel_theking:and he skip everything the reviewer said about the mc should not be able to do magic without people knowing
There is character development. He starts off with a low EQ and a solitary mindset due to little relationships with others. He does grow past that into a manipulative person and then into someone who caring for the people following him and interacting more with others.
Krader:I was going to read this until I read this review. What's a character without character development? I appreciate character development and well thought out plot lines so based on the review I won't be reading this.
This review made me not want to read it. However then I started to think about the legitimacy part and I wondered if he can read minds. Because legitimacy is the read minds not the protect your mind like occulomancy so I decided to give this a shot because I never read a book where the new Harry can read/attack minds. I haven’t read the book yet so don’t take this as me saying he can read minds,but that’s what this review told me. So I shall read this book based solely on this fact.
This review made me not want to read it. However then I started to think about the legitimacy part and I wondered if he can read minds. Because legitimacy is the read minds not the protect your mind like occulomancy so I decided to give this a shot because I never read a book where the new Harry can read/attack minds. I haven’t read the book yet so don’t take this as me saying he can read minds,but that’s what this review told me. So I shall read this book based solely on this fact.
