As long as she can't come back in ten years and use this as proof that they are married, it's fine, I guess.

Congratulations on the wedding! Thank god the block that only allowed reading on the app is finally removed. Does anybody know if it's just unlicensed originals or everything? I'm not reading anything else myself but I am interested.

It was okay/good in the beginning. He was basically a prick to bad people. Then he became the leader of several maligned groups, that he took advantage of, twisting them into weapons and such. Then he slaughtered the government of Australia, plunging the whole country into chaos. No idea why, he could have contacted the head of that government, preferably when they are new and pretended to be the Australian minister for magic. I can't say what happens past that. If you want to read about a murdering hypercrit, then you might enjoy this.

Is Jon a Sith? Because he sure does seem to enjoy killing his friends/allies in political ploys.

This is kinda reasonable. Itachi gave him a massive mental scar for killing intent, in the original series you see him freeze up several times because of this. Canon Gara couldn't use a technique like that at this stage because he couldn't concentrate, even if he did have psyco levels of killing intent.

8 chapters of this is just too long. Almost 12 days in real time due to release scheduling.

That first one was probably just a more efficient and better vanishing cabinet.

Orochimaru is afraid of death, right?

Sounds interesting. I wonder if the writer modified the Omnitrix in any interesting ways, perhaps taking inspiration from DCs original Hero dial or atleast included aliens from the marvel universe in the watch, perhap also aliens from other popular work.

I believe the potters had James in their late 40's - early 50's and they were above 70 at the time of their death. They died of dragonpox suspiciously(imo) after their son married a muggleborn and before Harry was born. It wouldn't be surprising that the dark side was more subtle in the deaths of the pure blood house heads. The much younger Evans grandparents also ended up dead before lily and james. They had "normal Muggle deaths" before the age of 50, suspicious. Maybe it was a car crash and petunia used it for lily and james too. Though it wouldn't be surprising for it to be magic related giving another reason for Petunia to hate.

Where is our head girl? Will he give students in Harry's year a heads up to talk to their heads of house if they want to take potions? Honestly that news should have been sent out in a Letter from the school.

I understand that in a way it's fate but I hope there's a reason for Dumbledore being there. Perhaps Harry sensed something or Voldemort tried to mess with him. Dumbledore knew about the carnival meeting, presumably from black or potter but why go to the ministry as if knowing it's a distraction? Ohhh...Snape? That would be disappointing if it's the only reason. How loyal is Snape in this timeline? Where he probably feels far less guilty.

I wonder what he is after? Is it the servants? The elder scroll translator? The artificial sun gong that you shout at? Did we get any lore for that thing? Considering the myths about the actual sun and it being blackreach, it being related to Aetherium someway would be fun. The thing is probably an annoying difficulty of tonal locked. Alot more interesting things are in the other cavern under markath, right? The dark heart, library and orary.

Hmm.. A blank space that makes her feel disconnected with the passage of time might actually be better for long term sealing. Though perhaps someone like her will be able to feel time without outside stimuli.

No mention of it being his birthday, which should be when the letter is delivered, already dubious about the quality of this.

He'd picked up so many strays over the years that I fully expected him to keep toneri. I wonder how visible the water on the moon is from the ground? Assuming that the diameter is similar to our own, so the size of Australia. The water would still need to be pretty large. I wonder if the bijuu or sages sense anything?

They should modify the seal so that the One tail can manifest a avatar with the strength and size of a cat. Though with whatever his shape is instead.

I'm not sure if the bloody mist had a background like this in the original but it does make some sense. There's the butterfly effect in action, screwing with Obito's plan and so messed up our MC's plan.

I think it would be funny if the seal that was put on Naruto last chapter just changed his hair colour to uzumaki red.

Her boss? She's just the Hostess at the Coffee shop she goes to.