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Seraphy64
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2020-05-25 09:37

It's one of those books where you have to translate a sentence yourself to make it understandable. The MC has wild personality swings between pussy and badass. Some of his breakdowns annoying. The system is good, and he isn't ridiculously OP which can ruin stories. Just OP enough that he crushes most opposition but has to put thought and strategy into battles to win vs harder enemies. The action is good, would be much better with an editor so it makes more sense, but still better than most authors that blatantly avoid writing fight scenes. Overall I enjoyed the story and want to see the female kitten catch back up with Alex and adventure with him.

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All in this review is true, Alex approves it.

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Amazing review that’s not spam and is helpful to the author But I wish it’ll update soon as it is my definite fav on this site ;-;

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