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AlexzY
AlexzYAuthor5yr
2019-08-08 13:23

Taking advantage of the Bug, I will review my book, but I will not give 5 but a 4.5 <How cool I am> * I pat myself * Well, if you have any questions, leave it below and maybe answer it but if I consider it a spoiler to answer you, I will be ambiguous with my answer. Extra Fact: I am using this book space to write this original, I had about a month without uploading a chapter of my previous book, written in Spanish, and I had about 3k of visits when I decided to write another original novel, now that I think about it, It is as if I had chosen to write a book with a difficult start.

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Skelatron
SkelatronLv15

The part where alex is out cold laying in the little pond and the chains come and kill the goblin charging at him. Will that ever be explained? What were the earthquakes? Im glad your writing this. Took the edge off of a hard work day.

AlexzY
AlexzYAuthor

If you read the dates I have written you will see that it coincides with the battle of the infernal dragon and the titan, they caused the tremors. Chains are no dungeon skill, it would be more an effect of a magical contract or a promise that takes shape to fulfill its mandate. I am ambiguous with the answer, since it would be spoiler to say that they are exactly.

Skelatron:The part where alex is out cold laying in the little pond and the chains come and kill the goblin charging at him. Will that ever be explained? What were the earthquakes? Im glad your writing this. Took the edge off of a hard work day.
Skelatron
SkelatronLv15

Ahh i see. I didnt notice the quarilation. Thanks for answering my questions. Im loving this novel so far 😊😁

ELord
ELordLv12

Hey just a question is this novel harem/polygamy ? I don't want to waste my time reading a harem or polygamy novel so please tell me.

AlexzY:If you read the dates I have written you will see that it coincides with the battle of the infernal dragon and the titan, they caused the tremors. Chains are no dungeon skill, it would be more an effect of a magical contract or a promise that takes shape to fulfill its mandate. I am ambiguous with the answer, since it would be spoiler to say that they are exactly.
AlexzY
AlexzYAuthor

He will not have harem or polygamy. Maybe I like to read some stories with a harem, but in the end, I still prefer a normal romance of a couple that does not interrupt the flow of the story by having to create the background of each new possible couple and how the MC ends up making her fall in love with him. My MC is someone who had a blur and a new account, which makes him a child with ***** knowledge, I would feel weird when doing a harem with my MC in that state, apart from not having much ability for romance, so If I add a couple... it will be in the distant future.

ELord:Hey just a question is this novel harem/polygamy ? I don't want to waste my time reading a harem or polygamy novel so please tell me.
AlexzY
AlexzYAuthor

*Adult*

AlexzY:He will not have harem or polygamy. Maybe I like to read some stories with a harem, but in the end, I still prefer a normal romance of a couple that does not interrupt the flow of the story by having to create the background of each new possible couple and how the MC ends up making her fall in love with him. My MC is someone who had a blur and a new account, which makes him a child with ***** knowledge, I would feel weird when doing a harem with my MC in that state, apart from not having much ability for romance, so If I add a couple... it will be in the distant future.
HansTheCool
HansTheCoolLv5

Is the mc op good sir?

AlexzY
AlexzYAuthor

It is in the middle... I would not know how to say, because the MC is always moving forward where the enemies only get stronger... but I will say a little yes, he is Op but not much... sorry if I am confused, but this answer can give you some reader of mine since I have in mind many characters much stronger than my MC.

HansTheCool:Is the mc op good sir?
TheDolphin
TheDolphinLv13

Seeing a practitioner of the Dao of monster isekai is rare. As a respected Elder, I must know if this will eventually be cursed by the Xianxia Ten Fold Mountain Splitting Cliche Array. I have seen so many young masters fall into the trap of the world gaining random power ups. Where something that was labeled as the strongest form suddenly becomes average when the young master goes to another area. This is an evil technique which I hope the heavens will punish. Ay, I am but a feeble man, but as Heavens Will, you should know if you can stop this technique.

AlexzY
AlexzYAuthor

Sorry TT.TT They cheated on me! or not... IDK hehe.

TheDolphin:Seeing a practitioner of the Dao of monster isekai is rare. As a respected Elder, I must know if this will eventually be cursed by the Xianxia Ten Fold Mountain Splitting Cliche Array. I have seen so many young masters fall into the trap of the world gaining random power ups. Where something that was labeled as the strongest form suddenly becomes average when the young master goes to another area. This is an evil technique which I hope the heavens will punish. Ay, I am but a feeble man, but as Heavens Will, you should know if you can stop this technique.
Sekz318
Sekz318Lv6

Ohh que sorpresa autor, no sabia de esto. Me pasare a leer tus libros

5Pawn
5PawnLv3

Is the little cat playing an important part in the future

AlexzY
AlexzYAuthor

yes

5Pawn:Is the little cat playing an important part in the future
Memester_Damon
Memester_DamonLv15

You already said that it was a ‘safe area‘ which infers that it's a safe place where fighting is prohibited. And although the name of the chains isn't specified it can still be linked to the bet between the goddess of life and the god of dungeons. Also i love your story nya

AlexzY:If you read the dates I have written you will see that it coincides with the battle of the infernal dragon and the titan, they caused the tremors. Chains are no dungeon skill, it would be more an effect of a magical contract or a promise that takes shape to fulfill its mandate. I am ambiguous with the answer, since it would be spoiler to say that they are exactly.
PUERKO_Senpai
PUERKO_SenpaiLv4

oye esta historia está completa???(finalizada)

AlexzY
AlexzYAuthor

no, tengo anotado como quiero que termine, pero aun me falta mucho para llegar a ese final.

PUERKO_Senpai:oye esta historia está completa???(finalizada)
ZedukelStarstryker
ZedukelStarstrykerLv12

He's a puss- Sorry He's a cat

ELord:Hey just a question is this novel harem/polygamy ? I don't want to waste my time reading a harem or polygamy novel so please tell me.
ZedukelStarstryker
ZedukelStarstrykerLv12

Also about the goblin entering the safezone. All monsters are driven by hunger I assume, so why are they allowed to break through, especially with their all around low stats?

AlexzY:If you read the dates I have written you will see that it coincides with the battle of the infernal dragon and the titan, they caused the tremors. Chains are no dungeon skill, it would be more an effect of a magical contract or a promise that takes shape to fulfill its mandate. I am ambiguous with the answer, since it would be spoiler to say that they are exactly.
PonjuPonju
PonjuPonjuLv4

Safe zone? Yes. But it only keeps out those under the Dungeon's control. Once they break that control, they can get in - either through Willpower (Alex) or stubbornness (dead goblin). The repulsion force is only as strong as walking through mud, so it's not completely prevented. However, the RULES of the safe zone still apply and were enforced. Once inside, if the goblin didn't attack, it wouldn't have died.

ZedukelStarstryker:Also about the goblin entering the safezone. All monsters are driven by hunger I assume, so why are they allowed to break through, especially with their all around low stats?
Thedailyidiot
ThedailyidiotLv3

are you dropping the book or are you gonna continue it

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Leo_Hex
Leo_HexLv15

A wonderful take on the isekai genre. This is a welcome subvert of the isekai genre. Firstly the protagonist Alex isn't an over powered wish fulfillment author insert hero. He's a normal guy who got caught up in a weird situation, Ok well in the first chapter his whole family dies tragecly, basically out of nowhere, and by the time truck-kun finds him he's sitting depressed in a state of delirious despair, on a park bench. Its tragic and funny at the same time in a morbid kind of way. But Alex does suffer in this story and you do feel for him. Spoilers Below. After rencarnating in an egg Alex spends his first days fighting for his life, and running away to try and find some safe location. And he does find it, unfortunately it's a safe room in a dungeon and as a dungeon monster by disobeying the dungeon and entering it, he's made himself a traitor and now has a kill on site order for his head. Fantastic. But their is a bright side while searching for food he comes across a mother cat avenging her kittens and for helping her in her last moments Mama Cat ignores the kill on site order and nurses him back to health. Giving her his blessing and dropping a miracle class loot for her adopted kitten child. (Ok, yea. Incase it wasn't obvious from the title. Ales is a dungeon Mob. Specifically a weak little kitten.) But even without his Swag new collar and blessings he's well on his way to becoming the strongest dungeon Mob ever. Not soon enough thou. Because soon after the demon lord, who runs this dungeon walks into the scene. Beats Alex within an inch of life and steals his mother's necklace, saying he'll givit away as some premier loot. Alex on his part seeing how outclassed he is does the rational thing and vows to kill him, reclaim his treasured necklace, and make that demon regret ever even think of stealing from him. And that's all the set up. I could go on how the battles are cool, and varied. how the lore is sprinkled in to explain the power system. Or how Alex's journey of revenge and growing stronger is compelling to read, and root for him. Honestly though there is no one reason to read this story. It's how it all comes together that makes it good. I would liken it to cake batter. The ingredients alone are ok. But it's how they come together that forms the overall feel. And the feel is nice.

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