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David_Drake
David_DrakeLv44yr
2020-02-17 11:01

You have a MC who had everything he ever wanted. A special power, money, goddesses that love him and him always being in the right. Literally the MC is blessed with luck that has been used as a plot driver so far. The MC was sent to the past in the new world as a royal dragon because he was killed while being summoned. There is also way too many cliches in this story and mini arcs that were pointlessly added as filler. The summary of this fic hasn't even started yet even after 30 chapters making it very misleading. I'd rather read a revenge plot of the kid who was being bullied than this young master who gets everything spoon fed to him. At least there would be a sense of ******* and development than what is found here. Rate: 3.6/5 cause its still a good story if you can stand the cliches.

Dying in the Middle of a Class Summoning

DemonicPanda
4.4
62 Chs

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Precheur
PrecheurLv5

2.2. That's completly dumb. The dragon kingdom possess full legitimity to this mine and the forteress they are attaqued by the human kingdom and this last one got rekt. You're trying to tell me that even in this case for whatsoever reason, they have to listen to their demand ? Do you even know just a bit how politic works at this epoque ? In this situation, not only have the human kingdom to pay a compensation ( it can be a territory ), but they don't have a word to say about that, they are in the wrong. And even more, why would the dragon kingdom accept such a ****ed up condition ? You're telling me they captured a territory, but let the ennemi noble govern it ? Are you dumb ? Who would allow such a thing, there is no way they are loyal, that's like raising a worlf in a sheep field. That's fucking dumb. If this empire had to existe, it wouldn't be for more than 1 month.

5yr

Jailbait17
Jailbait17Lv4

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5yr
DaoistDarkStar
DaoistDarkStarLv15

Not much too say as its still in its infancy(story and protagonist) but it has a decent world build and character description without being to info dumpish. The story follows the protagonist and has multiple viewpoints without destroying the flow of the story. 5 Stars.

5yr
Ochoa
OchoaLv13

I think that this has a lot of potential, and the way that you have set the story up and created the characters has created an entertaining and enjoyable story that draws people in. I hope that you decide to focus a little more on this story as you will get more people reading it if it has more updates. P.S. The way he gets there is very different from other summonings so it drew me in once I saw the novel.

5yr
WanderLunz
WanderLunzLv4

Meh. Really great for pleb readers, but not for me. I don’t care much for terrible grammar, but I can deal with it. Sh*tty plot development, on the other hand is the one thing that you should avoid at all cost, even when everything else seems fine. I mean it’s OK writing, but it’s a miss for me. Feels like a teenager writing a story and then an actual qualified writer editing the sh*t out of it, yikes. Wasted potential, try again next time with the reader in mind. Sorry it’s harsh but there’s way too many d*** suckers in the reviews, and if the novel is any indication, it’s gone to the author’s head.

5yr
fhxt
fhxtLv4

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4yr
Baneofthedragon
BaneofthedragonLv5

My only complain and worry is that you wouldn't finish this work........i was sooooo dissapointed that you dropped rebirth in bleach, i mean that was one of the best fanfics out there with a good plot and cool oc, but then without warning you just went away, and now you give us this interesting and original novel and now i'm worried that i'd spend my time and effort all in vain by being unfinished or dropped again....so please do not drop this!!

4yr
XystOblivion
XystOblivionLv12

Fantastic so far. Can’t wait for more!! I really like the twist on whole class reincarnation (pretty sure that’s what it is) and would love to see where you take this. 🤤👌

5yr
Mr_Shang
Mr_ShangLv13

Another good novel DemonicPanda is writing, unfortunately the updates it's a little messy but every chapter compensate, another gem it's found here guys give a chance and you will not leave with any disappointment.

5yr
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