webnovel
Precheur
PrecheurLv55yr
2019-07-24 05:45

2.2. That's completly dumb. The dragon kingdom possess full legitimity to this mine and the forteress they are attaqued by the human kingdom and this last one got rekt. You're trying to tell me that even in this case for whatsoever reason, they have to listen to their demand ? Do you even know just a bit how politic works at this epoque ? In this situation, not only have the human kingdom to pay a compensation ( it can be a territory ), but they don't have a word to say about that, they are in the wrong. And even more, why would the dragon kingdom accept such a ****ed up condition ? You're telling me they captured a territory, but let the ennemi noble govern it ? Are you dumb ? Who would allow such a thing, there is no way they are loyal, that's like raising a worlf in a sheep field. That's fucking dumb. If this empire had to existe, it wouldn't be for more than 1 month.

Dying in the Middle of a Class Summoning

DemonicPanda
4.4
62 Chs

Liked by 69 people

LIKE
Replies15
TheTrueGilgamesh
TheTrueGilgameshLv6

Welp that's dumb i know but what do you expect to this kind of story and author🤦

5yr
8
MALAKITITI
MALAKITITILv4

Hey racist your here 😆 .

TheTrueGilgamesh:Welp that's dumb i know but what do you expect to this kind of story and author🤦
5yr
TheTrueGilgamesh
TheTrueGilgameshLv6

It ain't racist if it's true little slave😂

MALAKITITI:Hey racist your here 😆 .
5yr
2
MALAKITITI
MALAKITITILv4

Where did you hear that racist boy? 😆 in your imaginary friend?

TheTrueGilgamesh:It ain't racist if it's true little slave😂
5yr
2
MrRagHand
MrRagHandLv15

He may not be too familiar with how kingdoms and politics work but at least he can spell, oh my Lord I think I just got a migraine trying to read your review

5yr
10
Precheur
PrecheurLv5

yeah i gt issue with my pc, but so what ? Are you a kid ? When someone tell you that you're doing bad you answer : yes but you're ugly ? Was your commentary usefull ? I hope it makes your life more meaningfull.

MrRagHand:He may not be too familiar with how kingdoms and politics work but at least he can spell, oh my Lord I think I just got a migraine trying to read your review
5yr
17
SinningSword
SinningSwordLv4

Jeesh, no need to be rude.

5yr
Login_Achieved
Login_AchievedLv4

I tried to read this review but its so badly written that I had to give it up. The typos are awful.

5yr
6
David_Drake
David_DrakeLv4

The reviewer makes a good point. If the author can't make a believable outline for the arc then their is no point in wasting time when the author is obviously making it up as he goes along.

5yr
12
BrianG9677
BrianG9677Lv15

I have not read this, why dont you write a novel if you think it is easy

David_Drake:The reviewer makes a good point. If the author can't make a believable outline for the arc then their is no point in wasting time when the author is obviously making it up as he goes along.
5yr
David_Drake
David_DrakeLv4

I have idiot lol. Next time get some original burns or maybe some burn heal?

BrianG9677:I have not read this, why dont you write a novel if you think it is easy
5yr
10
MrRagHand
MrRagHandLv15

I’m 31, served in the Army now an Army Reserve Captain. I have a wife, so i’m clearly not ugly. I’m a combat veteran and I think killing terrorists that threaten international peace is certainly meaningful...

Precheur:yeah i gt issue with my pc, but so what ? Are you a kid ? When someone tell you that you're doing bad you answer : yes but you're ugly ? Was your commentary usefull ? I hope it makes your life more meaningfull.
5yr
Precheur
PrecheurLv5

What the hell are you talking about ? You're stone bro.

MrRagHand:I’m 31, served in the Army now an Army Reserve Captain. I have a wife, so i’m clearly not ugly. I’m a combat veteran and I think killing terrorists that threaten international peace is certainly meaningful...
5yr
8
Scattered_Dragon
Scattered_DragonLv2

Kids

4yr
Primaterian
PrimaterianLv2

I'd just like to say... Peeps that responded to Precheur's review were less agreeing or disagreeing with it, and more so dissing at him, sheesh.

4yr
Other Reviews
Jailbait17
Jailbait17Lv4

Reveal spoiler

5yr

DaoistDarkStar
DaoistDarkStarLv15

Not much too say as its still in its infancy(story and protagonist) but it has a decent world build and character description without being to info dumpish. The story follows the protagonist and has multiple viewpoints without destroying the flow of the story. 5 Stars.

5yr
Ochoa
OchoaLv13

I think that this has a lot of potential, and the way that you have set the story up and created the characters has created an entertaining and enjoyable story that draws people in. I hope that you decide to focus a little more on this story as you will get more people reading it if it has more updates. P.S. The way he gets there is very different from other summonings so it drew me in once I saw the novel.

5yr
WanderLunz
WanderLunzLv4

Meh. Really great for pleb readers, but not for me. I don’t care much for terrible grammar, but I can deal with it. Sh*tty plot development, on the other hand is the one thing that you should avoid at all cost, even when everything else seems fine. I mean it’s OK writing, but it’s a miss for me. Feels like a teenager writing a story and then an actual qualified writer editing the sh*t out of it, yikes. Wasted potential, try again next time with the reader in mind. Sorry it’s harsh but there’s way too many d*** suckers in the reviews, and if the novel is any indication, it’s gone to the author’s head.

5yr
fhxt
fhxtLv4

Reveal spoiler

5yr
David_Drake
David_DrakeLv4

You have a MC who had everything he ever wanted. A special power, money, goddesses that love him and him always being in the right. Literally the MC is blessed with luck that has been used as a plot driver so far. The MC was sent to the past in the new world as a royal dragon because he was killed while being summoned. There is also way too many cliches in this story and mini arcs that were pointlessly added as filler. The summary of this fic hasn't even started yet even after 30 chapters making it very misleading. I'd rather read a revenge plot of the kid who was being bullied than this young master who gets everything spoon fed to him. At least there would be a sense of ******* and development than what is found here. Rate: 3.6/5 cause its still a good story if you can stand the cliches.

5yr
Baneofthedragon
BaneofthedragonLv5

My only complain and worry is that you wouldn't finish this work........i was sooooo dissapointed that you dropped rebirth in bleach, i mean that was one of the best fanfics out there with a good plot and cool oc, but then without warning you just went away, and now you give us this interesting and original novel and now i'm worried that i'd spend my time and effort all in vain by being unfinished or dropped again....so please do not drop this!!

4yr
XystOblivion
XystOblivionLv12

Fantastic so far. Can’t wait for more!! I really like the twist on whole class reincarnation (pretty sure that’s what it is) and would love to see where you take this. 🤤👌

5yr
Mr_Shang
Mr_ShangLv13

Another good novel DemonicPanda is writing, unfortunately the updates it's a little messy but every chapter compensate, another gem it's found here guys give a chance and you will not leave with any disappointment.

5yr
Related Stories

Strongest Necromancer Of Heaven's Gate

Good Looks: Check! OP Skills: Check! Face Slapping: Check! PP Size: Check! Lucien was more than ready to embark in his new adventure to save a dying world from destruction as part of the Heaven's Gate Project. However, just as he was about to be sent to the world that he was about to save, an accident happened, which forced his Patron God, the God of Gamblers, to take another gamble in order to preserve his chosen candidate's life. Lucien, who's new identity was named Lux, found himself in a world where darkness could be light, and light could be dark. A world where morality was but a thin line from depravity, and a happy ending could only be gained, by facing the world and slapping it with a Legion of the Undying. ----------- Author's other stories. System's POV - Ongoing Strongest Warlock - Wizard World Irregular (You won't see this in my profile. Search for it manually. currently ongoing!) Reincarnated With The Strongest System (Completed)

Elyon · Fantasy
4.7
1236 Chs

Imprisoned for a Trillion Years, I Was Worshipped by All Gods!

He was supposed to transmigrate to a magic world, but due to an accident, he ended up trapped in a massive library. The system assigned him a task: for every book he read, he would be rewarded with mana stones, until he finished reading all the books. A trillion years later, Daniel finally finished the last book! [Ding, detecting that the host has finished the final book. Calculating system rewards.] [Ding, reward calculation complete. Dispatching rewards. The total number of mana stones the host has accumulated: 99999999...9999.] "Damn, am I that rich now?" [Ding, detecting that the host has completed the task. Loading world...] ... Goddess of Fate: "Daniel, my divine realm needs expansion. Could you sponsor me with some mana stones?" God of Storm: "Daniel, the divine punishment is about to descend. Could you lend me some power to help me get through it?"

Cancer_Reo · Fantasy
4.5
595 Chs

My Vampire System: A Dragon's Revenge

"Ray Talen, what type of name is that, that name does not fit me." Sen, the last and most powerful dragon left roaming the skies causing chaos and destruction across the land. When all hope is lost the human race call upon their last hope, a powerful witch. Unable to destroy the dragon the witch uses the last of her power to cast a spell. Sen has not been defeated but has now been reborn as a human. How will Sen live his life now as a human who he once despised and saw as weak? Aka : My Dragon System/ Revenge Begins at Age 5/ Reincarnated into a Human? Completed Novel The First book, in the Talen/My Vampire System Series. Read My Vampire System next! P.A.T.R.E.O.N JKSmanga for more content and support. https://www.patreon.com/JKSManga Discord link https://discord.gg/huTJG43

JKSManga · Fantasy
4.4
533 Chs

Reincarnated With Three Unique Skills

[ Congratulations on receiving the following Unique Skills: – Appraisal (Basic) – Skill Absorption (Mythic) – Universal Synthesis (Ultimate) ] _____________________________________ "Synthesis Skills: Swift Sword Strike + Fire Toad's Breath." [ Ding! ] [ Congratulations! Your Skill Synthesis was successful ] [ Your skills evolved into: Azula Sword Strike ] "Synthesis Materials: Titanium Runic Sword + Wyvern Bones" [ Congratulations! You Synthesis was successful. Your Sword has evolved into Skeletal Dragon Sword ] _________________________________ In a heart-wrenching tale of loneliness and despair, Ethan's life has been one of unending tragedy. Orphaned at a young age and tormented by a relentless terminal illness, he spent his final days confined to a cold, confined hospital room. As he takes his last breath, he awakened in a mysterious void, where Ethan is given the opportunity to choose three unique skills that will define his new existence. With millions of options but only three choices, he carefully selects his path, setting the stage for an extraordinary journey of Reincarnation. Reincarnated into a fantastical world filled with magical Skills, powerful beings, and untold dangers, Ethan must navigate his new life, wielding the skills he chose to survive and thrive in a realm where anything is possible. But the question remains: Will this second life bring him the happiness and purpose he was denied in his first, or will it lead him down an even darker path? Chapter release: 2 chs/day Guys, its my first time writing, and it might not suit everyone. I can only say sorry in advance. Thanks for reading!

Elias_Nightwalker · Fantasy
4.4
467 Chs

I AM A MAGE BUT WITH MILF SYSTEM

****EXTREMELY SMUTTY **CAUTION: CONTAINS ELEMENT OF TABOO, Julian, the son of Duke Alden and the grandson of Grand Duke Augustus stood Infront of the crystalline ball that emanated mana. The crystal absorbed his mana and started glowing with purplish hue, with a sparks of lightning. "Yes, I have unlocked Lightning Affinity," Julian said, a spark of excitement lighting up his blue eyes. Suddenly, the ball began absorbing too much mana, Julian's eyes widened in horror as the energy swirled out of control, crackling with an intensity that was and terrifying. Just as he realized the danger, the ball erupted in a blinding flash, a shockwave of power surging outward. Julian wasn't hurt, but he felt a strange sensation as a dark mist swirled in front of him. Suddenly, he saw a strange entity, a shadowy figure, slip into his forehead. Then, Julian heard an unfamiliar sound echo in his head: “WELCOME TO THE MILF SYSTEM.” Connecting....Success Initializing.......Success “FUCK THE MILFS AND GET STRONGER, CONQUER THE MILFS, CONQUER THE WORLD.” , The voice said Curiosity piqued, Julian quickly asked, "Can you tell me more about the MILF SYSTEM?" The voice continued, "Sure, The MILF SYSTEM will help you reach unimaginable power as a mage. You will need to complete the tasks assigned to you and earn points." ********************* MILF SYSTEM - TASK POINTS CHART Handjob - 10 Points Blowjob - 20 Points Sex - 75 Points Creampie - 100 Points Threesome - 200 Points Spank - 15 Points Anal - 150 Points ********************* Julian grinned, excitement bubbling up inside him. “Well, if that’s what I should do to be stronger, I guess we don’t have any other choice,” he declared, determination shining in his blue eyes ************** [Huge Harem] [In Depth R-18] [Hardcore Fetishes] [Extreme Sex] [Gore] [Big Boobs] [MILF] [Best Girls] [Anal] [Threesome] [Foursome] [N-some] [Big ass] [Impregnation] Some smut scene may contain: [Spitting] [Slapping] [BDSM] [No NTR - No sharing - No mind control - No drugs or potions that influence the girls A lot of Netori and Stealing] Contains long and detailed smut.

author_210 · Fantasy
4.4
409 Chs
Login