Item: Dying in the Middle of a Class Summoning
Rating: 2.2
Author: Precheur

PrecheurLv55yr

2019-07-24 05:45

2.2. That's completly dumb. The dragon kingdom possess full legitimity to this mine and the forteress they are attaqued by the human kingdom and this last one got rekt. You're trying to tell me that even in this case for whatsoever reason, they have to listen to their demand ? Do you even know just a bit how politic works at this epoque ? In this situation, not only have the human kingdom to pay a compensation ( it can be a territory ), but they don't have a word to say about that, they are in the wrong. And even more, why would the dragon kingdom accept such a ****ed up condition ? You're telling me they captured a territory, but let the ennemi noble govern it ? Are you dumb ? Who would allow such a thing, there is no way they are loyal, that's like raising a worlf in a sheep field. That's fucking dumb. If this empire had to existe, it wouldn't be for more than 1 month.

Dying in the Middle of a Class Summoning

DemonicPanda

4.4

62 Chs

Liked by 69 people

Replies15

TheTrueGilgameshLv6

Welp that's dumb i know but what do you expect to this kind of story and author🤦

5yr

MALAKITITILv4

Hey racist your here 😆 .

TheTrueGilgamesh:Welp that's dumb i know but what do you expect to this kind of story and author🤦

5yr

TheTrueGilgameshLv6

It ain't racist if it's true little slave😂

MALAKITITI:Hey racist your here 😆 .

5yr

MALAKITITILv4

Where did you hear that racist boy? 😆 in your imaginary friend?

TheTrueGilgamesh:It ain't racist if it's true little slave😂

5yr

MrRagHandLv15

He may not be too familiar with how kingdoms and politics work but at least he can spell, oh my Lord I think I just got a migraine trying to read your review

5yr

PrecheurLv5

yeah i gt issue with my pc, but so what ? Are you a kid ? When someone tell you that you're doing bad you answer : yes but you're ugly ? Was your commentary usefull ? I hope it makes your life more meaningfull.

MrRagHand:He may not be too familiar with how kingdoms and politics work but at least he can spell, oh my Lord I think I just got a migraine trying to read your review

5yr

SinningSwordLv4

Jeesh, no need to be rude.

5yr

Login_AchievedLv4

I tried to read this review but its so badly written that I had to give it up. The typos are awful.

5yr

David_DrakeLv4

The reviewer makes a good point. If the author can't make a believable outline for the arc then their is no point in wasting time when the author is obviously making it up as he goes along.

5yr

BrianG9677Lv15

I have not read this, why dont you write a novel if you think it is easy

David_Drake:The reviewer makes a good point. If the author can't make a believable outline for the arc then their is no point in wasting time when the author is obviously making it up as he goes along.

5yr

David_DrakeLv4

I have idiot lol. Next time get some original burns or maybe some burn heal?

BrianG9677:I have not read this, why dont you write a novel if you think it is easy

5yr

MrRagHandLv15

I’m 31, served in the Army now an Army Reserve Captain. I have a wife, so i’m clearly not ugly. I’m a combat veteran and I think killing terrorists that threaten international peace is certainly meaningful...

Precheur:yeah i gt issue with my pc, but so what ? Are you a kid ? When someone tell you that you're doing bad you answer : yes but you're ugly ? Was your commentary usefull ? I hope it makes your life more meaningfull.

4yr

PrecheurLv5

What the hell are you talking about ? You're stone bro.

MrRagHand:I’m 31, served in the Army now an Army Reserve Captain. I have a wife, so i’m clearly not ugly. I’m a combat veteran and I think killing terrorists that threaten international peace is certainly meaningful...

4yr

Scattered_DragonLv2

Kids

4yr

PrimaterianLv2

I'd just like to say... Peeps that responded to Precheur's review were less agreeing or disagreeing with it, and more so dissing at him, sheesh.

4yr

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