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peppermint101
peppermint101Lv134yr
2020-08-18 09:05

The story keeps dragging and very repetitive, a problem in this story that could be solved in 10 chapters take up to 80 chapters it keeps dragging over and over the same thing, There's is no growth in characters it's just the same scheme in different chapters with different people.

The Tempestuous Consort - Wilfully Pampered by the Beastly Highness

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