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kahari
kahariLv134yr
2020-02-17 22:03

I think this story is good enough........just give the story flow. I wonder the female lead is a good character. This is also a reincarnation story..................................................... Also i wonder about male lead. I wait for the story goes.................. The reincarnation gave some change to make a new life for the FL, to improve some that they can't if former life. I wonder in reality it can happen 🥰🍀

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BobDylan
BobDylanLv3

I like the story because whatever FL do ML gives support to her in every way,even if she burn the butt of kings and queens.

miz_jim
miz_jimLv5

😂😂😂

Brianna_Estrada
Brianna_EstradaLv2

👀

Daoist135409
Daoist135409Lv1

Cool

melz_eilish
melz_eilishLv10

I might give this a try

Tracers_Dinos
Tracers_DinosLv2

Mhm

Shoki_Chan
Shoki_ChanLv2

Yesh

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dibru_1046
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Immortal_Goddess
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So far, there are errors in grammars, names etc in the first 60 chapters up for Trial Read so it needs a bit more editing. For the stability issue, this remains to be seen. So for both areas, 3 stars for now. The story, characters, plot and world background are all interesting and intriguing. Though there are a couple of novels who dealt with both protagonists being reborn reincarnated or transmigrated or a combination of any, this story so far will pique your interest. Why? The author’s style of writing for one thing. Though it truly annoyed me with all the censorship and what not... if they truly want to censor, they have to set up a lock for novels with mature, R-18, smut, gore etc rating. Parents should be responsible for their own children and not impose this on the authors. Authors write, artists draw, musicians play, composers compose.. with no regards to anything for their works to be a masterpiece. So do not censor arbitrarily. It hampers was one’s reading. Anyhoo not to get off from the topic, the author’s writing as well as the translation was great!!!👍🏻💫⭐️. It was explicit enough to make the readers delve and be a part of the world that the author has created. Be warned though as the opening chapter is brutal and gruesome. But this is needed to establish the female lead, Shen Qingdai / Feng Tianlan’s foundation for her change in character. This is typical for any revenge/avenge theme. The growth of the female lead is gradual but fast. Unlike other fast growth, hers has a basis: a combination of a perfect body for cultivation with excellent enlightenment skill/talent. So no brainer that she will rise in power when these two things are placed in one body. Both hers mind you. This is just a brief review and will be updated as the translation progress. Fan Service for its readers: this has been adapted to a MANHUA. Below is the Link.. (there are more... ) http://m.kuman5.com/19486/

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