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SeaVen
SeaVenLv55yr
2019-07-01 00:39

A reasinable 3 wishes?? Is having all the affinities reasonable?? Is havinv those every technique reasonable?? The OP chakra a reasonable?? Is that the description of REASONABLE??? this is a trash with this alone...its reasonable

Shinobi in a world of magic

SengokuBangloi
4.2
30 Chs

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SengokuBangloi
SengokuBangloiAuthor

I admit that you have a point, however reasonable is relative. If talking of the norm where MC has a great boost or advantage however still has to showup with some sort of effort and go through hardships like 'The saga of Tanya the evil', 'serei gensouki' or 'reincarnated as a slime' (I'm using this example lightly) then yes it would be excessive to call it 'reasonable'. However compared to the extreme like 'smartphone in another world' which has a character that can use all elements or say like saitama from OPM or a god of destruction from db super going into a magic world effectively making them invincible on arrival, I don't find it that excessive. I hope I have argued my point enough, and I'm sorry that our definitions don't coincide.

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SeaVen
SeaVenLv5

then our definition of reasonable is diff... for me,- there should be , MUST be and Will be equilibrium... balance in everything no matter how much OP ... for example a BEAST will be born with a strength of ten human but its intelligence is lacking,,, like as HUMAN - we have intelligence but we lack Physical superiority ... see my point ?

SengokuBangloi:I admit that you have a point, however reasonable is relative. If talking of the norm where MC has a great boost or advantage however still has to showup with some sort of effort and go through hardships like 'The saga of Tanya the evil', 'serei gensouki' or 'reincarnated as a slime' (I'm using this example lightly) then yes it would be excessive to call it 'reasonable'. However compared to the extreme like 'smartphone in another world' which has a character that can use all elements or say like saitama from OPM or a god of destruction from db super going into a magic world effectively making them invincible on arrival, I don't find it that excessive. I hope I have argued my point enough, and I'm sorry that our definitions don't coincide.
5yr
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SengokuBangloi
SengokuBangloiAuthor

Clearly, I see you are more on the side of one-man brigade while i'm on the one-man against the world spectrum. I don't think we can bridge this gap.

SeaVen:then our definition of reasonable is diff... for me,- there should be , MUST be and Will be equilibrium... balance in everything no matter how much OP ... for example a BEAST will be born with a strength of ten human but its intelligence is lacking,,, like as HUMAN - we have intelligence but we lack Physical superiority ... see my point ?
5yr
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SeaVen
SeaVenLv5

i think so to... go and be what u are.

SengokuBangloi:Clearly, I see you are more on the side of one-man brigade while i'm on the one-man against the world spectrum. I don't think we can bridge this gap.
5yr
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SengokuBangloi
SengokuBangloiAuthor

Will do, hope it was a good read for you or if it wasn't, sorry it wasn't your cup of tea.

SeaVen:i think so to... go and be what u are.
5yr
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