It has this sort of raw and pure writing that makes it heart warming. The only thing that I don't like is the short chapters and how many there are. Not enough passes to read enough to move on from one event to another. Sometimes it takes three days before it moves to a different scene. Other than that, it think that it will make people invested in the characters and want to know what happens next, just would like longer chapters to cut down the need for fast passes.
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