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I enjoy a good romance, but stories with originality are gold in any genre.
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Aww! So sweet and touching! I can definitely see the progression of you as a writer Aimee since the first book with Reth and Elia and circling back to a memorable moment like the claiming. I just have to wonder, what do the herbivores do for the marking? They naturally don't have the fang length or sharpness to piece flesh the same way the wolves and big cats do.
I feel like that one kid in class that asks a question everyday, but I don't actually know how the whole Chimera mating thing works. So I have been telling myself how it works is that they are all virgins until they find their mates or choose one, and whoever they sleep with they are bonded too whether they love them or not, and the Anima are free to mate regardless. Is that right or is it more about emotional bonding? Cause it seemed hinted that none of them other than Zev have slept with a none mate and the rest are virgins and if they are r**** they will be stuck with that person.
Sorry, I never finished any of the other books, right now working through the chapters of Dark Alpha, but is the Wildwood on good terms with the wolf tribes or whatever? Are they living together amongst the wolves? Because Tarkyn was...alarmed that Harth is a wolf like she was the enemy because of that.
Eh. I had really high hopes for this novel because the others are so good, but there is no spice or intrigue in this one as much as the rest. It's still young and has room to become better, but really for this author, it is not doing them any favors with it being really slow and boring to the point where I skipped all the chapters to read the latest ones and still nothing entertaining has happened recently.
I might have to reread, but I'm a little confused by how this entire scene started. She wanted to see Zan, then slipped and Tarkyn overreacted by the guards doing their job to keep her on the trail? Someone clarify the details of who moved and what they did wrong first to set everyone off.
The only critic that I would give is that you seem to have to buy the locked chapters instead of a fast pass. I really love this book and am completely hooked, but I am very much not appreciative that you have to purchase a short story. If it were longer and about only the first two main characters, then yes that would be worth the money, but...just no.
It has this sort of raw and pure writing that makes it heart warming. The only thing that I don't like is the short chapters and how many there are. Not enough passes to read enough to move on from one event to another. Sometimes it takes three days before it moves to a different scene. Other than that, it think that it will make people invested in the characters and want to know what happens next, just would like longer chapters to cut down the need for fast passes.