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ICallOutIdiots
ICallOutIdiotsLv55yr
2020-02-21 22:52

Dropped, this book went from a solid 9 to a solid 1, it was good but for someone apparently smart he doin g some stupid ****, like he doesn’t have common sense....like who tf as a child even in a alternate world goes around and tries exploring, might I remind you he’s 5? Then the time skip just felt forced, like someone just cut that part of the chapter, can we also talk bout his incestual habits? which apparently because he loves his family so much, clearly, and for a smart man hes making some dumb choices.......

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Krizzeir
KrizzeirAuthor

First of all Kiel was a scientist from his previous world. so new things just fascinate him very much. second his thinking is being detained by his small build. But due to the power gain which he never had in his previous world gave him some confidence. PLEASE don't tag that as stupid. ITS human nature. As for the time skip, I apologise...

ICallOutIdiots
ICallOutIdiotsLv5

Yes I am sorry for classifying it as stupid, just got out of hand sorry but i ment he’s acting stupid, and did you notice that when sciencetist do experiments and one of the most important things to do is to ensure safety with safety gear and not rush into it? Because science is dangerous?

Krizzeir:First of all Kiel was a scientist from his previous world. so new things just fascinate him very much. second his thinking is being detained by his small build. But due to the power gain which he never had in his previous world gave him some confidence. PLEASE don't tag that as stupid. ITS human nature. As for the time skip, I apologise...
Krizzeir
KrizzeirAuthor

Actually in the medival times, scientist and engineers had to play with their lives many times due to their experiment. Marie curie and perrie curie arw live examples. So your anecdote is wrong. Because at that time their was nothing so callled safe. And now too there is no absolute safety. So this claim takes no value. To attain something risk is required. And to stop because of age is even more absurd. Because that what separates prodigies from normalies. Hope it clarifies your misconception on scientist being gods. They are human beings too. And all humans make mistakes.

Krizzeir
KrizzeirAuthor

Actually in the medival times, scientist and engineers had to play with their lives many times due to their experiment. Marie curie and perrie curie arw live examples. So your anecdote is wrong. Because at that time their was nothing so callled safe. And now too there is no absolute safety. So this claim takes no value. To attain something risk is required. And to stop because of age is even more absurd. Because that what separates prodigies from normalies. Hope it clarifies your misconception on scientist being gods. They are human beings too. And all humans make mistakes.

ICallOutIdiots
ICallOutIdiotsLv5

That’s if your counting that the mc is from medieval times?! He was originally from normal futuristic sci fi kind of earth, so he should at least know that much

Krizzeir:Actually in the medival times, scientist and engineers had to play with their lives many times due to their experiment. Marie curie and perrie curie arw live examples. So your anecdote is wrong. Because at that time their was nothing so callled safe. And now too there is no absolute safety. So this claim takes no value. To attain something risk is required. And to stop because of age is even more absurd. Because that what separates prodigies from normalies. Hope it clarifies your misconception on scientist being gods. They are human beings too. And all humans make mistakes.
Tsunashi
TsunashiLv2

Are you a dumbass or what? The author had clearly stated that he wanted to visit the forest outside to explore how the things worked here. He was not going to throw away his life. Just a bit overconfident which he go the result for. Also for the preparation you keep talking, read the previous chapter carefully. He even got bow lesson and others just for preparation, even packing food and bandages. Don't you know that village kids are explorers and start their adventures from an early age. So the age factor is also justified. Read the story properly before criticizing the author. He did a great work in working out the psychology of a little boy. And the smartness you talk about, the author later has stated that he had become a little dumb at the beginning due to his ***** mind and child body imbalance. Specifically body hormones affecting the mind.The concept in itself was my first time learning. So either you didn't read anything or you are the nitpicking type who just comes to reduce the ratings of the novel. Guys there Don't follow this guy's rating. He doesn't even know what he is arguing with the author here. Just give this a try if you want. If you don't like it, leave this. Why complain like an idiot? Criticism should also have its points. Author you are doing great here. keep it up.

ICallOutIdiots:That’s if your counting that the mc is from medieval times?! He was originally from normal futuristic sci fi kind of earth, so he should at least know that much
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