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END Initiated...
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END Initiated...

Krizzeir

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What is END Initiated...

END Initiated... is a popular web novel written by the author Krizzeir, covering SYSTEM, UNIQUE CULTIVATION, REINCARNATION, HIDDEN ABILITIES, SMART PROTAGONIST, WEAK-TO-STRONG, MALE LEAD, Fantasy genres. It's viewed by 1.2M readers with an average rating of 4.42/5 and 78 reviews. The novel is being serialized to 78 chapters, new chapters will be published in Webnovel with all rights reserved.

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Warning: If you want too much events without sufficient world building, look for other stories. this is probably not for you. Don't complain if you find the middle chapters a little boring. Everything is there for a reason. If you can't be patient... you got it. A world where mages rule the world. Elemental power is considered the supreme. Magic is considered the nature of the world.  Kiel, a world renowned scientist of the modern world sacrifices even his life to create his own ideal world.But now is given a chance to reincarnate in a magical world where possibilities are endless. But alas, he who thought that he had a great future waiting for him, witnessed that he was awakened without even an element? Is this the end? Or is this the start of a new journey? What will Kiel do, loaded with his knowledge from the previous world. Join Kiel as he traverses the path of magic now instead of science. Join him as he takes you into how a real fantasy world should be A new chakra cultivation! A whole new path. A whole new world. What will the world have in store for a little mortal? *** Note- If you are bored with all the regular trade off the mill novels, this is something that you want. Give it a try. This is my first novel. So please don't take too much offence! Story may have a lot of buildup. So only for patient readers. Note: Guys I am trying to reform the earlier chaps. So don't complain and be patient. I am a human too.

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Rxel
RxelLv6Rxel

As of chapter 18, the story is coming along beautifully in regards to the plot, but what really stands out is the world building of the author. The author makes me want to delve deeper into the world that he has shown us, and continue reading more. The author has a flair for drawing in readers into the world that he has created. There are a few grammar mistakes. There are a few parts where you should check how you phrase certain things. I realize that the author likes to use double punctuation like ?? or !! once in a while is fine, but if it is used too often then it detracts from the effects that it should give. Other than that, there is nothing else for me to criticize. With a bit more polishing, this story will really shine. The chapters are wonderfully long, too. Keep up the good work, author! :)

Veronica8
Veronica8Lv5Veronica8

This review is part of a swap. What I like is the originality to the cultivation and Rebirth themes, utilizing Chakra and known methodologies into the story. Quite ingenious actually. I really enjoyed MC's moment with the gods and the trials. His Rebirth is gold, brilliant. MC is coming across as a well rounded character. Kind of like an anti-hero. The telling of his family is cleverly executed. A few things this story needs. Revision for technical quality (grammar and typo fixes, novel format), especially in the first chapters up to when MC meets God. I'm going to be honest, those chapters were really sloppy. These are your opening chapters, which need to hook your readers line and sinker. Also, when it comes to opinion type perspectives like the prologue, be aware that some readers may take offense or feel awkward by it. When formulating such character opinions, they need to be written so it's clear that the perspective is from the character and not propaganda. It has to come across objective, non bias and (of course) story related. I've seen a lot of authors get in hot water because the narrative comes across as propaganda, political agendas and so forth where it really isn't. Even I've fallen into this trap and faced some nasty hate mail for my self pub stuff because peeps thought I'd spoon fed them gay. You don't want that. If you revise these things, you have a potential 1m+ viewer with power stones raining in.  I'm even cocky enough to say this can be a contract worthy story WN can proudly show off provided the technical and storytelling quality is smooth and tight. Lift the bar. Thanks for sharing. I hope my feedback hel** a bit.

Krizzeir
KrizzeirAuthorKrizzeir

Hi author here! Just giving myself a 5star review to achieve 10 reviews. And no... This is not shamelessness. This is called self help. Anyway this novel is about a new system of cultivation in a magical world. I'll focus more on the life of the author and how he achieves his dreams. So hope you give it a try.

Kotagi
KotagiLv5Kotagi

It’s a really good story. Right now it’s just short because the author is in college(I think, he could be in high school, I’m not sure on the specifics). The MC is actually really smart and actually acts like it too. He calm in tense situations and very observant of his surroundings(these qualities are shown in the story). Even better the MC seems to question the very things that readers would think about. The world building is impressive so far as it doesn’t take away from the MC “screen time”. The quality of the authors work is really good as it’s improving noticeably over the course of a few chapters. The author, despite not being able to put his full attention into the novel at the moment, has shown that he wants and is willing to improve his work by listening to the readers. At least that’s my take on it. Enjoy!

Nospacess
NospacessLv5Nospacess

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holson_Charles
holson_CharlesLv4holson_Charles

well i read the whole 1st volume(41 chapters) before i dropped it... the story is well writing, no grammatical mistake, its quite a good book. i ll definitely tell someone to read it... But to me its too boring, too slow i had to force myself to finish some chapter. I read to get excited but read the whole first volume all i felt was annoyance.. If you like slow pace, boring, 41 chapter prologue, probably another 200 chapter before this MC can probably do something worthwhile, with good update, no grammatical errors, and quite an ok MC type book than this is for you. and you will enjoy it.. But to me this is torture if i read this book while on my bed i would have probably slept. well my opinion.. Bye.

ICallOutIdiots
ICallOutIdiotsLv5ICallOutIdiots

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Aoalbjorn
AoalbjornLv3Aoalbjorn

Worst clifhangers all over the chapters. Timeskip are sudden and doesn't descrive what happened during that time leaving out important piece of imformations. Many important information was left like how he was saved, who attacked him with arrows. who impriosoned his dad. why they did that. really the worst way to skip time.

starking
starkingLv7starking

Thank you uuuuuuuùuùuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

achoo
achooLv5achoo

writing reviews everyday so that the author would feel like coming back to write next chapter ;*;*;*;*;";";";*;*;*;*;*;*;";"!"!""!"!;"!";"";";"!"!"!!"!"!₹!"!"!"!"!"!"!"!"!""!"!!"!"!"!"!"!"

achoo
achooLv5achoo

author please come back ::::::::::::::"::""::"":"::":"":":":"::"":":"::""::":":":';';";";""::"":":":";";";;"";;"";";";';';';';';;';';';';';';';';';';

Tucker100000
Tucker100000Lv4Tucker100000

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may1st
may1stLv5may1st

Here we are. Writting quality: I will only use one word to describe it 'AMAZING' 5* Stability of update: not bad, it's still early to talk much about that, since the story just began. 5* Story development: I must say it's one of a kind❤ 5* Character design: it's cool, but it's a 3* World background : not bad, 3*. Please don't drop this, am sure it will do good, the story has a nice premise, 'it's scary in the first chapter though' I was actually thinking, what if someone think about doing such thing for real😢 But am relieved in the next chapter, glad he did not anhiliate the world, 'phew' 😥 But I love it, so am gonna keep reading. Keep up the good work.💪💪💪💪💪

achoo
achooLv5achoo

super read ............!";';';;'"!"!"!"!"!"!"!"!'!'!!""!"!"!!"!"!"!"!'!'!"!'!!"!"!'!"!'!"!"!"!'!"!:!__!!_!__!!"!_!_!_!_!_!_!_!_!_!_!_!_

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Killer_Condor
Killer_CondorLv3Killer_Condor

Apparently I have to write 140 words to rate this so I'ma say make more author you have a too inconsistent updates and it's like your starting one of those comment Patience Sects

GroundShaker
GroundShakerLv5GroundShaker

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Orthanos
OrthanosLv5Orthanos

I love how the MC is challenged. No really... This MC has such mixed luck that his life might be a Gatcha game or like his fate is determined by a fortune cookies. That is how randomly good and bad his encounters are. Watching how he rolls with the challenges, might make you think he has a death seeking habit with his life. Well what i mean to say is that, this isn't some cheesey MC with bull**** good luck with a smooth journey. No this dude has to deal with life!!! Shocking concept I know. Sometimes you may get frustrated with him, But he's real character. MC does not feel forced nor is the story forced. It has a delicate balance that few originals or fanfics have. I put this story development with Dragonborn Saga and the like. Good Job Author.

Haris_G
Haris_GLv4Haris_G

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Origin_Saint
Origin_SaintLv4Origin_Saint

I like how the mc grows as a person and this last chapter explains a lot since the mc was making some dumbass decisions before now. Anyway, I love the book so I hope you continue writing.

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