Review Detail of Jmitch1 in Gamers of the Underworld

I couldn't get past chapter 1. If I see the words "Dungeon Core" put together anytime soon, I'm going to kick somebody. The way this is written is so weird, confusing, and childish. If I didn't see A-Z, I would not be sure it was English. I mean, Damn. And not to say the grammar was terrible, it's just... whoever edited or translated this probably doesn't use English that often, speaks often, or is still in High School. That's all I can say.