It's different, you learn right away about the FL's past and feel for her sad destructive path. Post apocalyptic, zombie, cultivation user which transmigrated from another life. It is definitely unique but the story is rather slow but once you get past the necessary information it turns and you start cheering for FL, her wonderful dog luck (soft spot for German Shepherds) and her newly adopted daughter Lili. Keep up the good work, especially the fighting, struggles and relationship between mother and daughter. Nothing can make the heart strings tighten more then someone's self sacrifice for the people they love.
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Thank you for your review and kind words. Keeping the story's tempo is honestly one of my issues. Originally, my goal was to create a slice of life type of novel, covering almost every single day of MC's life. However, when I put it together in my head I ended up with over 1000 chapters needed to finish it, so yeah, not gonna happen. Right now I'm still introducing some main characters from time to time, but after all of them group up together, the story will gain some speed. The overall goal is still set on creating a diffrent type of Apocalypse novel, in which family and human values are the most important, but I'm afraid of spoiling some plot if I continued talking about it, so let me just end it here for now.
It's fine it's your novel, but for viewer increase it is something to think about. Write at the speed and tempo you feel will bring your story to life. I learnt that with my first, after its completed you will still see numbers rise and as long as it leaves a good feeling and no lingering regrets. 😀
