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stella2138
stella2138Lv55yr
2019-05-30 06:39

The story is pretty good.However,i'd advise you to change the cover. The story's aura doesn't match too well with the cover.Yes the cover's nice but i'm looking at the aura it exibits. find something much more suitable for your story . What i've experienced is that the title and cover of a book attract more or less traffic of readers.Your title is really good. So just change the cover.I assure you,when you see the cover,you'll feel connected to it and you will find the one that exibits the same aura as your story. Apart from this your story is very nice.

The Zombie Queen’s Second Chance [Rewrite Ongoing]

xWangan
4.3
42 Chs

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xWangan
xWanganAuthor

Thanks for the review. I'll think about changing the cover. When I originally made it, I think I focused to much on what a Zombie Queen usually would be, so I went too much into the darkness theme, even though it's not really the main focus of my novel.

5yr
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xWangan
xWanganAuthor

Hello readers. I’m the author of ‘The Zombie Queen’s Second Chance’. I’m going to use the review panel to write about a few things I wasn’t certain where to put before. Also, please ignore my rating. I just shamelessly put it at 5 stars, because why not, right? As of now I’ve got honestly no idea how long the novel will be. I’ve got most of the plot figured out, but as of right now I’m still not sure if everything of it will be used unchanged. I’ve been writing now for quite some time, but it’s my first time trying to put my writing out there, and in a foreign language to that. Because of that, while I am trying to check grammar, I may make some mistakes. In case anybody sees some, feel free to point it out to me. I will gladly fix it. About the story itself, since I know that’s probably what is the most interesting for a lot of people, here’s some information's. Even though it’s a novel with an Apocalypse oriented world, I’m not really a fan of fighting, or rather my abilities to write fights aren’t good enough. Because of that I will be trying to take the novel in a slightly different direction, in which my female lead will be more focused on her daily life, and perhaps what she knows best – business. That’s why her abilities won’t really be supper offensive, and she herself, even though she is called the Zombie Queen, won’t be super overpowered. About romance. There will be some, and the main couple won’t take long to get together after meeting each other. But the thing is, our ML is going to need some time to come out. So, don’t expect him to be running around FL too soon. I think that’s all for now. xWangan

5yr

TrinityShock
TrinityShockLv5

Loved your style of writing.. it feels like i was reading a translation novel XD (Unlike mine.. that feels like a fan-fic XD) I always adored zombie apocalypse type of stories, like zombie sister strategy. So i'd probably read it more.

5yr
mhiz_spicy
mhiz_spicyLv5

😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚☺️☺️☺️😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😊😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚☺️☺️😚😚☺️☺️

5yr
Scarlettbunny
ScarlettbunnyLv11

Reveal spoiler

5yr
dillydally_girl
dillydally_girlLv3

The first chapter of the story got me hypnotized. Maybe because there's a lot of Chu name and I honestly not use to reading a name like your characters. But anyways, the story is great.

5yr
NIUr
NIUrLv3

:ok_hand: original :clap: idea :clap: Pretty unique twist on the cultivation-op-plis-nerf-hax genre-thingo. Enjoyable, good world building, er Dunno, perhaps one of the edgier cultivation ones out there? Pretty good. Can't really ****post this. *tips fedora*

5yr
ThatAmazingGirl
ThatAmazingGirlLv14

I was able to read it to a point. Although I'm not a fan of transmigration stories and all. I mist say it is well written. And organised. To those fan of such stories, you could give it a try.

5yr
Daoist_Food
Daoist_FoodLv4

Although I'm only reviewing this at eight chapters, I have to say that your novel is great. The writing quality is a full on five as is the stability of updates. I love the plot and especially that even when your novel is about zombies, the people around the female lead are pretty realistic in their reactions.

5yr
Antinous
AntinousLv3

This is a solid 5 out of 5 in every aspect. The writing quality is spotless and the stability of updates is perfect with 2 chapters a day. Also the story development is very smooth and enjoyable - I did not see the zombie coming (though its in the title.)

5yr
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