Review Detail of Shiksha_Jerath in Descent

The story is only thirteen chapters in when am reviewing it, so not much to go on but it's a promising start. I would recommend it to people who like fantasy/magical genre. Overall, the story gives a nice albeit a cliche feeling but it stands well on its own points as well. I would suggest the author to be a bit more thorough with the grammatical errors though they don't take away much from enjoying the read :) My only advice : You should write what you feel good and comfortable with. Don't go with what others want or what's in the fad for the moment. Keep up the good work.