Review Detail of JacksonWalker in Descent

Dear CrescentWolf This novel was pretty good,it was just a little confusing at some points. It wasn't really because of spelling and grammar errors, although you did have a lot of that, it was just that how the situation was described was confusing because of the lack of descriptive words. The characters are ok, although I would like you to explain a bit more on how they met. I haven't read very far into this, only 5-6 chapters, but it's a good idea; you just need to work on your execution. This novel is not for me currently, but maybe if I come back after you get some help with the words and grammar it would be better. I wish you well with your novel. Sincerely, Jackson M. Walker