The premise is amazing and I wish more people had similar stories but it is held back by the skill of the author and the need of an editor. The characters are all bland and the Mc feels like the typical SI robot with no motivation for his goals and is invincible in terms of knowledge and power, even though the world revolves around his actions and decisions he still doesn’t seem like a part of it. Although many story’s are like this or worse the premise of this story is really good and has tons of potential. My wish is for the author to continue writing for a year or two and then redo this story and turn it into something unique.
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