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2021-02-07 18:05

Her family nearly went bankrupt. She was devastated and depressed and had her heart crushed. she ended up trying to kill herself. after her finally rebuilding and new guy and all the story development. we find out the truth. Her childhood sweetheart. The great love of her life that nearly destroyed her has loved her all this time and did all of that to protect her by thinking that this would convince a very clever and resourceful man that he wasn't in love with her anymore. yep. He had her get so heartbroken that she killed herself, just to keep her safe. If you are dealing with a "villain" that can think 10 steps ahead. and you know that he is that clever. why would you think that this would work? even if it did, with him being a bad guy, why wouldn't he kill her just to tie up loose ends? In no world, is it common sense that taking away someone's support network and leaving them in the dark of the threat to their life would be a good idea. Nothing he did would protect her. He didn't plan anything. It was just a series of, hey, this might make people think I hate her. There are so many stories that have used this 'hurt to protect' theme. But this one felt poorly done and made me feel frustrated and angry. unlike other ones, I couldn't excuse it or reason it away or believe that in this situation, it was a good idea. not even for free, will I finish this story. I really like the MC. But I dispise the ex and that the new love interest wants to stay close friends with the guy feels off. I get him being a long time friend. but considering you know all he has done to someone you now love, a part of you has to think, I can't have the same bond with him that we had in the past.

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BAJJ
BAJJAuthor

There there. Calm Calm. breathe...

UhNuh
UhNuhLv15

I can’t ...... .....

BAJJ:There there. Calm Calm. breathe...
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Wallflower_Monk
Wallflower_MonkLv10

I’m at the point in the story where you realize the ex has a ‘reason’ for what he did but I was frustrated because she’s been through so much! 😭💔 Thanks for the spoiler.

Bwoah
BwoahLv3

Woah and I heard ML is a playboy too.

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glasuri
glasuriLv14

Read up to chapter 16. Wanted to give it a shot because of its good reviews but the writing quality, grammar, and the whole ~chu ending dialogue by the main character's system deterred me from reading further. However, I did appreciate the fact that the main character (Lexi) of this novel wasn't reborn to the past but just given a second chance after her suicide attempt, which is unique as she still has to face and deal with her past mistakes instead of returning to a clean slate like many other reborn novels. Essentially, the premise is interesting but the execution is lacking. Additionally, I couldn't sympathize wholly with the protagonist. It isn't simply because she is a "vicious" character—there are plenty of antihero/villainous protagonists that I sympathize with even if I don't agree morally with their actions. There just wasn't much depth or background motivation added to her character to make me sympathize with her, especially since all her actions seem to point at her getting her just desserts even if she did fall in love with a douchebag who didn't appreciate her (doesn't justify her actions though). There's potential for interest in her redemption, but there isn't enough interest so far to continue reading. I would definitely suggest the author add more details/descriptions and inner thoughts of the main character earlier on in the novel as there's no real attachment to the character at this point. Of course, take my opinion with a grain of salt as this is based only after 16 chapters.

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