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2021-04-12 02:06

The characters are so well designed that you can become fond of them. The story was fine but in my personal opinion very rushed and felt a bit forced at times. Nevertheless I enjoyed it and I recommend it.

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Reviewing after being upto date, as of now, chapter 73. Sigh. I really hate discovering novels that really makes me not want to stop reading them and is still on going. 😭 You see, I didn’t come from the Author’s novel, New Life: Second Chance, which I’ve read to be connected to this one, but I did check it out and for some reason, decided not to read it and just jump on to this one as Author did say that we can do that too. So here I am, reading about Lianne and Kai’s story, aswell as the 2nd MCs’ story. Although I do have questions while rading and would simetimes think that the answer might be at the first novel, I’m still pushing thru with this because I love both Lianne and Kai 🙈 I find the story really interesting. Not boring at all. So far, no heavy and complicated atmosphere, which I hope would carry on until the end 🤣 And omygosh, the fluff! I love all the MCs’ interaction, even the friends. 😍 The novel seems fast paced but not at the same time, I mean, atleast for me, it’s not. I actually find the pace really satisfying as I’m hoping that this novel would not be a very long one like what the Author said. 🤣 I love the lightness of the story, so far. There were no drama as of the moment, no face slapping yet. I really really love Lianne! I love her characters, which was shown throuout the chapters. I love her decisiveness. I love how understanding she is. I love her rationality. Given, she gets flustered over Kai, but that’s just it. Eventhough she gets flustered, she can still think rationally baout the situations and what to come. I find her very very refreshing! A breath of fresh air as they say. I love reading about her ❤️ I Ha. I think this might just be the very first time I’m reviewing a novel that is still ongoing and is not a Trial Read from WN. 🤣 And I want more chapters please! 🙈 Can’t wait to know more about them and how the story would unfold. Thank you, Author, for sharing their stories 😍 As for you, who’s debating whether to read or not, please do give this a shot. Read a few chapters. Give it a chance just like how Lianne gave one to Kai 🤣 You never know, you might just become a fan! ❤️

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