This story has schizophrenia. It jumps around fast and changes past events and its mind so much that it is dizzying. The gramme and sentance structure is good. It's just the pacing and scenarios that need polishing. Also, this poor female lead. She's had the worst bashing I have seen in any novel. Writer, the re needs to be a limit. A strong female lead does not need to have the whole world against her to prove her strength. Spoiler. The male lead does irredeemable things to the female lead. Drugging her, destroying her personality, erasing her memory and stealing her children. Nothings gonna bring you back from that, especially after it takes you 2 years to own up and say sorry.
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LIKEA writer who reads reviews and is accepting of change. You have my admiration. It's a good story premise
_escapist:Thank you for the review, I will edit the whole story this December before moving on, might add several chaps to explain it further. Thank you again! ❤️😊