This novel is great, when you read it you can find yourself lost in the book's world and only become more immersed as you read on. The writing quality definitely deserve 5★ It is clear and able to deliver the meaning of terms needed and convey the emotion of every scene from the heartwarming interaction between the siblings to the funny conversation between the FL and ML. The stability of update are always punctual so I'll give 5★ Story development! *Slam 5★* if this doesn't deserve the stars then I don't know what would. The story are flowing smoothly, easy on your imagination, and there are no needless details (to me anyway) Character design 5★ personal vendetta against riajuu aside, the characters in the novel are clearly depicted and let you imagine them with ease. Don't fantasize them too much tho you might ran into a pole. World background deserve 5★ uwu. Be it the beautiful original world of Alinea, the realistic modern world of Ara, both have solid foundation on how they are and have a down to earth condition that will satisfy you.

If you like adventure, a touch of romance, a taste of a well-developed world, interesting characters including the side ones, clever writing and pacing, nearly sparkling grammar, and a fantastic story please consider reading this novel even just the first few chapters to see if you like it! I really enjoy it and think this is a very special novel. Starting from an adventure that feels like you’re listening to a DnD campaign and then we switch over to modern day Japan it’s so unexpected but so wonderfully executed. The story and lore are well crafted and the author does a great job using Japanese language to immerse yourself a little deeper than surface level into Japanese culture (but don’t worry they explain all the words if you’re scared of reading romanji!). The author knows how to pace and once you start reading it will be very hard to stop. The characters are really well developed starting with the FL she is strong, just, and charming. She is a character that you want to root for as a lead and you really feel that she will be able to accomplish her goals and tasks she sets out to do. The ML is little interesting as doesn’t act like a human so he’s a little clumsy but he develops quickly to really get to know and appreciate our FL. The side characters are charming and they develop well too - I honestly would be okay for some spin offs for most of them because they are so interesting! All in all if you read this far you may consider trying those first few chapters of Alinea. I hope I convinced you. :D

Best story in webnovel... I haven't read a story before when everything is on point... It started out as a transmigration story but it is much much deeper.. It was a bit confusing in the beginning but as we read everything becomes clearer.... It is a lovestory spanning many many centuries of two star crossed lovers and hopefully how they break the curse.. Every character in the story is well thought out and the way the story is presented is quite different from what you have seen in other stories.. The story was very refreshing and had a pecry Jackson vibe in some parts, and is a highly recommended read.. Well done dear author.. Im glad I started reading when almost everything is unraveled otherwise I would have died wating for chapters to come out.

An inreresting read with a unique plot. Characters are described well that you can imagine them vividly. The details written and daily updates show how much effort was given by the author. Keep it up

I hope that the playback could read the story as if it's really telling a story and not so robotic. I appreciate how the characters were described. It would be great though, if the itsy bitsy detail (like the color of their eye and the look and feel of their skin) of how they look were mentioned as well. 😊👌 All in all, there's something with the storyline that kept me read more...

new story line... i love the flow... interesting character there is no boring chapter. i just hope more chapter. please support the story please vote..

I was bored seeing all the stories in the web novel, I mean everything is like a repeat in each story, but author-san, your story is on a very different level. The first chapter already hooked me to know what will happen next. The characters, the plots even the background has its own charms. It was very fun and exciting to read every chapter in this story, I recommend it to the readers out there who likes a different taste of the second chance, revenge, face slap and magic genre. Trust me, this book is very good and money worthy, my first time ever to throw money in Web novel to read this book because it was too good. So thank you author-san for your amazing work.

Intriguing and very detailed writing. You get the feeling that you have to remember infos given as they're pieces of clues or puzzle left behind on purpose. Love the shifting between fantasy then reality with historical and traditional tidbits. Update more ❤

a great story with a great plot and characters. The daily chapters of this series are something I look forward to everyday thank, you author