This is the Author. I am grateful to everyone for reading my novel and giving me feedback. I hope t continue to write a story that you would certainly enjoy.

This is a review of the first fifteen chapters. The author has demonstrated mastery of both technical and descriptive skills. The author has interwoven cultivating methods and setting while forwarding the plot. This work doesn’t feel like you are reading a cultivation manual in between plot chapters. The pacing between plot developments is excellent. The lacking point is that only the main character is fully realized after 15 chapters. The side characters seem 2 dimensional at this point. Recommend!

The story is very well articulated - and the world building is quite comprehensive. I'm looking forward to rest of the story, and getting to know the characters better. @Author - thank you for your work!

thanks for the new update.............. very nice novel 😊😊😊😊 ❤❤❤❤❤ 💖💖💖💖💖💖 🙌🙌🙌🙌 😍😍😍😍😍 😚😚😚😚❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤👍👍👍

This novel starts up as the typical cultivation novel but big up to the author for planning out his cultivation system plus the novel is a slow build up living less room for mistake in the story line

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Great story. It has great potential. The part I like the most is that the hero isnt all powerful and all knowing. He makes mistakes. Hopefully the stories continues with the given quality. Only thing that bothers me is the update frequency.

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I really like the story. It also has lots of potential and is very interesting. Just need it to update more. I need more chapters. Gj author a very interesting plot

This is a great novel. It has great character and world development. It is even very educational in some places. The only problem I have is the slow upload speed.