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anon88
anon88Lv65yr
2019-05-31 04:19

This is a review of the first fifteen chapters. The author has demonstrated mastery of both technical and descriptive skills. The author has interwoven cultivating methods and setting while forwarding the plot. This work doesn’t feel like you are reading a cultivation manual in between plot chapters. The pacing between plot developments is excellent. The lacking point is that only the main character is fully realized after 15 chapters. The side characters seem 2 dimensional at this point. Recommend!

Return of the demon

Idontknowwhattosay
4.8
279 Chs

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Idontknowwhattosay
IdontknowwhattosayAuthor

This is the author. Thanks for the review. As for the side characters, its not that there are no important ones its just that I made a decision to only introduce them quite late. I have been always annoyed by how in many novels side characters are able to keep up with MC's in cultivation, even though MC is supposed to be insanely fast.

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1amlord
1amlordLv2

ITS GOOD

4yr
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Idontknowwhattosay
IdontknowwhattosayAuthor

This is the Author. I am grateful to everyone for reading my novel and giving me feedback. I hope t continue to write a story that you would certainly enjoy.

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seeker_wx
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The story is very well articulated - and the world building is quite comprehensive. I'm looking forward to rest of the story, and getting to know the characters better. @Author - thank you for your work!

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hormor1
hormor1Lv14

thanks for the new update.............. very nice novel 😊😊😊😊 ❤❤❤❤❤ 💖💖💖💖💖💖 🙌🙌🙌🙌 😍😍😍😍😍 😚😚😚😚❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤👍👍👍

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supreme_primordial
supreme_primordialLv4

This novel starts up as the typical cultivation novel but big up to the author for planning out his cultivation system plus the novel is a slow build up living less room for mistake in the story line

4yr
supreme_primordial
supreme_primordialLv4

Reveal spoiler

4yr
V_20
V_20Lv2

Great story. It has great potential. The part I like the most is that the hero isnt all powerful and all knowing. He makes mistakes. Hopefully the stories continues with the given quality. Only thing that bothers me is the update frequency.

4yr
1amlord
1amlordLv2

Reveal spoiler

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silverloon
silverloonLv14

I really like the story. It also has lots of potential and is very interesting. Just need it to update more. I need more chapters. Gj author a very interesting plot

5yr
Dra_HH
Dra_HHLv1

This is a great novel. It has great character and world development. It is even very educational in some places. The only problem I have is the slow upload speed.

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