Review Detail of SrLao in The Marvelous Superman

Quality of writing (3): sometimes switches from first person to third person in sudden ways, but it is understandable. Stability of updates (1): the last update was 5 months ago. Development of the story (1): it is a bad cut and paste of different series or movies. Example: he gave his family, the same spider that bit peter parker, all in the same day. the characters know he is in marvel, it is simply too strong the power of the plot for my taste. Character design (1): simple, without relevance, they are more of filler than contributions to the plot. World background (1): I only see a story where the fantasies of a child are fulfilled. Translated with www.DeepL.com/Translator (free version)