Review Detail of Lappidappi in Land Warrior: Discontinued

I liked it, the beginning was tough with the many grammatical mistakes but the story made up for it. The characters felt realistic and the world they were living in too. In good novels i can immerse myself in bad ones I can’t. In this novel I could, which is a clear sign for me that the author is doing things right. Only thing is the grammar, maybe try getting an editor or someone who can speak and help you correct by yourself!