Review Detail of BAJJ in Land Warrior: Discontinued

Writing Quality: 4/5 I can't say that this is not a well-written book. The reason why I graded it lower than it should is because of its disorganized paragraphs. I left an example in the first chapter for a more detailed insight. Stability Update: 4/5 Updates are still unstable but it is understandable as it was just starting. Story Development: 4.5/5 the story development was good and reeled me in by every chapter. It is commendable and interesting. Character Design: 4/5 This category should be 5 star but since there are only a few chapters published, I'm not sure about the character's stability. But for the 8 chapters that were out, characters are interesting and I could tell that they feel real by their train of thoughts and how they speak. World Background: This is where it amazes me. I like the fact that the story is set in the Philippines (please correct me if I'm wrong) which makes me proud and also interested at the same time. Overall, this story is interesting so far. It is action-packed with an interesting storyline. If I'm correct that they are Pinoy, well then, it makes me appreciate the hard work of our country's soldier. I'm adding it to my library and hopefully, see it rise one day. Best of luck!