Item: vfikffjiy
Rating: 2.2
Author: Bierbart

BierbartLv145yr

2019-05-26 17:48

The english quality has a huge margin to get better. But still in the middlebrsnge from what u can see in most original works. Cant tell too much about the story development yet but the mc seems kind of dumb and pus.sylike but welp we will see how it develops if we keep reading. Might see how it develops. Have a hard time reading cause the wrong and jumbled time conjugation added with the few vocabulary mistakes kinda ruins a reading experience u might get otherwise

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