Pros: Interesting Concept. Would like to see more of the story. Cons: Bad grammar Bad writing Extremely short chapters Narration doesn't make much sense at all because of bad grammar. Boring and extremely generic MC Overall: Meh~ Don't read it unless either the author fixes his/her writing or of you can stomach bad grammar... Let's wait and watch...
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LIKEKianaKaslana213:first time this 3 year novel of mine that I forgot in a corner of my head to get a review eh, not that I complain tho, by the way love your honkai fanfics dude.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]