There's nothing I can complain about. This story somehow hits me in all the right spots. The characters are life like and written beautifully. Each interaction makes me smile and frown accordingly. Although the story is just starting, I am very optimistic about it. As I read, it makes me yearn to experience the kind of long-lasting love like the MC, and at the same time, I feel the heartache she feels when she sees the ML (?) 😭 The pacing of the story is steady, and the world building is coming along nicely as more descriptions are revealed. All in all, definitely keeping this in my library. Keep up the good work! (๑˃ᴗ˂)ﻭ

Wow, I didn't expect to read a romance story with a lot of description. You put a lot of hard word in describing scenes and man, the emotions from main character miyeon is so detailed because it feels like I'm right there witnessing it with her. T he only problems is small typos here and there but I could still read without issues. Nothing major. Everything else, you did an excellent job and you have a talent for fleshing out your main characters and their relationships :D Added to my library!! Waiting for next

Part of a review swap, and at time of writing, there are 70 chapters. Have read until Ch.68. Writing Quality: English isn't Author's main language (like me) but it's not horrible or really bad. There are only minor errors and the flow of the story is not affected generally for me. The quality only gets better as you read on, so that's a huge plus. Stability of Updates: Very regular and persistent. I would, however, advise Author to perhaps think of slowing down a bit ... though other readers may kill me for that. Two releases a day is okay, I believe. It's just a suggestion, of course. Stockpiling chapters allow you to rest once in a while, and also takes into account times when you're unable to write (eg falling sick/exams etc). You can have mass-release events when there are a lot of stockpiled chapters. Story Development: It's a slice of life, so the pacing is slow. Which, personally, I like. I also love the details given and the description. However, I find it a bit disorienting when the scene seemingly jumps from one to another, or when there is a dream sequence. You could add a 'divider' sort of thing to indicate that the next paragraph had nothing to do with the one before it. A small symbol or whatever inbetween the two paragraphs would help teh flow and smoothness of reading. Character Design/World Background: The characters are well thought out and you can connect well with them. All in all, a good and enjoyable read. Came for the review, but staying for the story. This remains in my library. All the best, Author!

I loved your work. How you described the main character's - Miyeon's feelings like all her willingness and unwillingness, stuttering . I loved the puberty part the most . Keep it up. Waiting for new update .

I read this story up to chapter 56. It took me some times to get used to the Korean name at first. The writing quality is not bad. English is not the author's first language, so there are mistakes here and there. But that does not interfere much with my reading experience. I can see that the author's improvement in writing as I read more. The stability of updates is excellent. As I've been trying to catch up with the recent chapter, the author had updated a few chapters. The pacing of the story okay. It was pretty slow at first, but that also gave me a chance to get to know the characters better. The romance part was a bit slow. I wish the author would strengthen the relationship between FL and ML before moving on to MC's story in book two. Keep up the good work!

I really enjoy the character's interactions and just how well the author makes them flow. It feels as if you're actually there with the people talking. The author is very descriptive with his language and adds a lot to the table. I am thoroughly impressed with his work!!

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Pretty good, I don't read romance too often but this one wasn't that bad. Though it is hard for me to pronounce Korean names. I did like the author's style of writing, and he has grasped English enough to transmit what he's writing about.

I really fell in love with your story, the way you write has shown me that shakespeare's tongue can convey feelings, thank you so much for making my day, follow if