Not a hp story, effectively a full blown cultivation novel. I think my biggest issue is the clear intention to leave the HP world behind, ascending to a higher realm and what not. This is fine, but if you intended to throw away 90 percent of the HP world there's little reason to use it to begin with, and the narrative and structure of the story would be far better suited by a standard, cut and paste world of cultivation. Finally there's the massive over reliance on mythological figures to flesh out the story, at this point the author has yet to actually create anything, taking a Hindu mythos and forcing it to have aggressive sex with anything it can get it's claws on.
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Did you even read the damn warning that this is an AU? I even made this to explain: https://***.webnovel.com/book/13772794406217705/37227404900492279/Harry-Potter-And-The-Traveler/A-RAMBLING%2C-THE-FUTURE-OF-THIS-STORY%3F
new reader be like u can see most of them in fan-fic don't mind them author
What is an AU any way?
Alternate Universe I believe
