As the saying goes.. "The grass is always greener on the other side of the fence". BUT remember, that 'greener grass' belongs to me. anyway here is the usual 'shameless' review. i am currently writing this story. As of now, there is only two chapters for testing the water.. cuzzz you know.. the first time writing and all.. enjoy... Also please be gentle senpai :D

Not a hp story, effectively a full blown cultivation novel. I think my biggest issue is the clear intention to leave the HP world behind, ascending to a higher realm and what not. This is fine, but if you intended to throw away 90 percent of the HP world there's little reason to use it to begin with, and the narrative and structure of the story would be far better suited by a standard, cut and paste world of cultivation. Finally there's the massive over reliance on mythological figures to flesh out the story, at this point the author has yet to actually create anything, taking a Hindu mythos and forcing it to have aggressive sex with anything it can get it's claws on.

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Till now its pretty interesting. But i hope he will go now in volume 2 more for the magic instead the cultivation path. Author, keep up the good work and release faster. ;-)

Well, this is a new way of fanfic. Instead of normal reincarnation, this is a western and eastern novel combine together, i have not read it yet, but i will give you a high review for this new fanfic

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Man this story is actually really interesting and I’m looking forward to reading this. I hope you don’t ruin it by making a massive harem like I see in most fanfics// maybe 2 would be fine? Anyway the writing quality is decent and so far updates are regular, hope you can keep up the pacing. Also is he going to be a condescending prick? That would kind of suck... but great story!