u said this was ur official and main novel but ur not doing much also u the stars in the review are harsh because ur making it way to similar to supreme uprising atleast the begining which i have read i remeber that i have left a comment to u that u should read and then choose what to do i hope u heed my advice so that it gets original cuz even though the systems might be similar there are too many system novels so u cant really make them diffrent however what i told u about the story of the mc and the mc are too similar with supreme uprising so u have to change it even a little bit make him atleast only child and that about the bloodline
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