Item: Beyond Origin
Rating: 4.6
Author: Hatdogkomalaki

HatdogkomalakiLv45yr

2019-05-12 13:17

2 chaps a day pls. Best novel with almost op mc! Please after the story is done please make a gud fanfic at BTTH as ur last one was so gud that i am so excited about the next chap.

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