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AsianLadyBoy
AsianLadyBoyLv135yr
2019-05-22 16:35

I liked it allot when i first started, then i found my self skimming allot. Mainly because the author was making filler chapters that could have been summed up in 3 words like "He killed a beast" not a whole chapter about him killing a beast that does nothing for the story other then allowing the author to complete a chapter. The Mc wished for the knowledge of alchemy, with that knowledge it would allow the MC to become the best alchemist ever. Yet the MC wont take any pills, he is trying to "Strengthening his cultivation" first. But what it feels like is that the Author is using that as an excuse to slow down the cultivation of the MC so that Xiao Yan can catch up to the MC and they can be buddy buddy and hold hands while going on adventures together. I will keep reading it but so far The Author is nurfing the MC so that Xiao Yan can catch up. And that's just fuc king dumb. The author did say the the MC would have a boost in his cultivation soon. I will keep reading it but if it stays the same where the MC is trying to be really buddy buddy with Xiao Yan making it almost seem like hes the actually MC in this story and not Hao Shen. So far I'm not liking the way its turning out, you may but i don't. Again i will keep reading it since it has just started. And pray that the MC stops being a little ***** and get stronger. Instead of trying to wait for Xiao Yan so he can hold his hand.

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