Item: Rebirth: Battle Through The Heavens
Rating: 5
Author: Enlightened_Being

Enlightened_BeingLv65yr

2019-05-14 06:48

5 star for the release updates and the story doesn't have any plotholes, different scenario and different plotline, good character design, I don't care if the MC is super op or weak as long as the story is good and doesn't have plotholes it's a good story, for readers it all comes down to preference and opinions, even if it's a golden novel there will always be some haters.

Rebirth: Battle Through The Heavens

YeChenZhi

4.4

77 Chs

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