If you want a few tips on how to continue the story just read on. Otherwise this was an amazing fanfic and I would honestly love to see if you could keep this up. Here’s the ideas: How about you try writing up to the battle after Im and being recognised as the ruler of the world. Also you could have his son being kidnapped to kickstart the battle. After that how about a short arc with him exploring all of the seas, finding all the mythical place like the all blue (honestly for this I’m assuming it’s directly below the reverse mountain cuz that’s the most logical way), Elbaf, and the other places. You could also add him fusing the world devil fruit with a clone and get him to reunite the super continent Pangea to be the true ruler. And you can add more kids during this. Plus add in a bit more to the family part of the commanders who are single, and whitebeard. You could add in the annihilation or the celestial dragons. After this you could either finish it or continue on. If you are continuing, then you could have him marking the one piece world with the Mark devil fruit or maybe a space devil fruit, and have him travel to other anime worlds. You could have him meeting god again and being given the choice to either restart the story or continue onwards to another world. Also give him the ability to take his family and friends with him, or you can do the simple thing and just bind the world to his soul, allowing him to be the true ruler of the world and then he would be able to take care of his family. Or you could give him something like a personal world where only the people he allows can enter. And you could set a reasonable time dilation cuz you don’t want him to miss out on his family time too much while he’s in a different world. There should also be a limitation on the world where for the moment only Seth can enter, and the rest have to stay behind. Plus you could add a few more girls if you want by feeding him an energy or stamina related devil fruit. It’s not like the readers know all the devil fruits so it should be fine. (There’s already a lust devil fruit that Lilith had so it’s possible.) There are a lot of words to start off with some being insanely strong. You should decide if you want the story to end quickly or to keep it going. If you want to end it quickly then just send him to an op world and get him to get stronger and reach The top in one go. If you want to drag it out a bit, then get him to travel through different worlds and spend a few years in each to get the highest powers, plus a girl or two. Plus get the god to him and his girls a few hundred years per world conquered or just outright make him immortal and let him enjoy the travel between worlds. Put like a pier restriction for his friends and family to enter the new world. Like have to have IM’s strength level or Hagoromo’s strength to enter the Naruto world. If by this time or any other time you get bored writing, either just drop it or write the best scenes of each world. If at any time you want to finish up, just say that Seth got strong enough to hide his world from every other influence, and lived happily ever after. Maybe a short story about his wives and kids later on. I have more ideas but honestly I have no clue whether you’ll write up to this point or not, so we’ll see how it goes. If you need help just ask :)
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