This novel is like you accidentally step on dog dung. You know what I mean. I am quite surprised this is high rated. The story does not follow the typical norm on one piece, the MC is a big egocentric guy, justifying himself and contradicting himself at the same time, a big paradox. The world development well it is one piece no originality in there. The writing quality is below adequate I need to re-read a paragraph only to envision the scenes the author want to convey. Update is fine. Character development seems ****ty, the mc is like a standard chinese web novel Protag that goes like everybody is wrong I am the only one who is right. Overall I have this 1 star bec. Of my own disappointing views on this story.

Very bad grammar, missing letters and words, the actions of the mc are a nonsense and the interactions between the characters are weird and the "romance" with Hancock is cringe as f*ck. The basics rules of writting aren't respected, there is almost no commas in ths novel and the author seems to have a thing with capital letters as well.

Frankly I do not understand why there are so many 5 stars. it's horrible to read, there are good ideas but it's just badly said and too much time skip.

Well, the story sucks.. The Author need some self reflecting sessions about the plot and gramatical errors Overall it Average at best.. But hell im a One Piece Brain dead fans... Just keep those chapter Updating and screw the plot or grammars error.. That can't stop me for reading this novel.. I fvcking hate you author for those gramatical error and the plot holes... and.. I fuvking love you for the making this one piece novel come true.. Yeah im stupid and a brain dead fans.. So what..?? BITE ME..!!!

it a one piece fanfic so you can't go wrong. the problem it is the high popular beta with a super chad complex novel. where the mc goal in life is to have beautiful women. which is not a big deal. but omega males like this just shows why they don't get women. the is obsessed with the main case of girls nami and robin that he wish to join the strawhats just to f**k them and turn them in his property. he meets hancock and with in 2 days they are kissing. the next chapter she says i know nothing bout you tell me about yourself like they just become acquaintance after kissing. i can't see how people can read that type of romance when they are always yelling about NRT. i feel like a cuck reading about a guy traveling the world f***king girls with in a few minutes of interaction

halo this novel is epic hope you don't drop it a suggestion , imagen if red could make more clones and each clone could have different devil fruit , now imagen if he could fuse them and make a dubbel edge scythe-like in dark siders 2 (death) scythe ,and each blade having the correspondent light or glow like one blade be covert in flames en the second in lighting or different element gush ... gush (lava) not saying that you have to kill akainu but it would be epic and thx for the chapters

I really really really really really love this story ☺️ 😍 😍 so I just have to give this story thumbs up 😄 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 . 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍🏽 👍🏽 👍🏻

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I just found and read your novel to the present chapter. And found it to be a well written novel, with decent update. Gave lower story and world background ratings due to it only having slight changes, though I know you can't really change much of the story line, while being under 60 chapters. Development of MC and Pirate crew is very interesting and use of devil fruits. Liked the idea of Hancock stepping down and Margret with the blood blood fruit becoming the new empress. I hope you continue this novel and eventually make this Fan Fic into your own version to where can feel like your own work.