Got to ch. 28 and couldn't read this story anymore. Grammar is awful. Characters feel 2D. No character growth at all. Mostly the grammar that got me. I'm auto-correcting and fixing sentences in my mind and it devalues the story. I see there's 100+ chapters uploaded in a month. Author could update less and fix sentence structures and grammar then this story would be alot better.
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