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Review Detail of LavishSquirrel in Dragon King of Apocalypse (Douluo Dalu 3)-Completed

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LavishSquirrel
LavishSquirrelLv104yrLavishSquirrel

Got to ch. 28 and couldn't read this story anymore. Grammar is awful. Characters feel 2D. No character growth at all. Mostly the grammar that got me. I'm auto-correcting and fixing sentences in my mind and it devalues the story. I see there's 100+ chapters uploaded in a month. Author could update less and fix sentence structures and grammar then this story would be alot better.

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Dragon King of Apocalypse (Douluo Dalu 3)-Completed

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LazyPandaman
LazyPandamanLv1LazyPandaman

You want less chapters???

LazyPandaman
LazyPandamanLv1LazyPandaman

And there is alot of character growth later on