I'm just going to point out that the mc not feeling even just a little bit mad at Harry's mistreatment throws off the feel of the story, the fact he had to fake his anger. Maybe I'm a soft soul but seeing a kid that messed up would be tramatising at any age.

I think it's interesting.

I'm confused. Were these last 2 chapters in the past. I'm completely lost now.

As an American why the f would you care or even put American political stuff in your story? It literally makes me want to drop it. Your profile says Australia so I'm confused. I read these stories to escape, not be reminded of the BS I live through. I'm referring to the BLM stuff.

I enjoy this FF. Make the story how you want it to be. I've noticed authors that write and then when their audience gets upset they change it the chapter. These people tend to have burnouts in writing fairly quickly because they aren't doing what makes them happy. Do what makes you happy.

I only read fanfics on here or stories that don't go premium. If your story stays free I'll support you, if not. .well you know. Thanks for the ride.

oh yay. I can continue it. ✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧ Thank you for checking for me!

when your book gets done will I need to buy privilege to finish it? I don't mind spending fast passes or even coins to read your book. I love it. I just can't continue if I need to purchase more to complete the book.

aww yiss (≧▽≦) I love this story and I don't even like star wars...

I just realized you said educational books are thousands.. maybe in your country but in the USA college books are under 500 bucks. So paying for a book that cost 300 USD just for entertainment is dumb. If I'm going to spend that much on a book I'd rather pay for an educational one to further myself in life.

I added up how much it would cost me in my country which is the USA and with how much coins cost, it gets expensive. The cost for one completed book on here is more than how much I sell my exotic animals for, or a day trip to the beach, or a month of food. Book pricing on here is literally daylight robbery. From the reviews I've read no one in my country really enjoys this app because of the pricing. So I figure you all in other country's must be rich or are so used to paying an arm and a leg for everything that this is normal to you.

Kids come first ｡◕‿◕｡ thanks for the chapter!

Dang. Can't wait for more!

I only use WN as its easy and for some reason at my job even though I don't have Internet I can access WN. I agree, this company is tyrannical. I'll continue to follow on royal.road :). That's where I found your book anyways.

you know you don't have to tell us but thank you anyways! :)

people will hate me but idc. dropping. too poor to buy chapters.

dang. it was good. I'll leave this in my library just in case you continue it.

My Internet is really slow so I can't see the poll. However, when you do write the DBZ novel can you please explain some things as I don't really know alot about DBZ. I know the MC, his son, and a few people but that's it. I'm not saying explain everything but I would love to read another FF from you and be able to understand it.

no prob. I'm honestly interested in how well a story does after its contracted. I can't imagine people spending hundreds for books and there are tons of contracted books on here. even not well known ones get contracted and no one gifts them anything as they get buried under the contracted books people read the most. I've also heard people don't make much. I've been on this site before WN bought people's books and have read previous contracts people have posted online. I was thinking about writing on here but nah.

I'm going to tell you right now, I drop every novel that in contracted or I read elsewhere for free. there is too many pay to read novels on this site for it to be worth it for me. for you maybe it's worth it.