Review Detail of Yshlich in Synthetic Survivor: Machine Age
Review detail
The story itself is a wonderful concept, a splicing of a super scientific world with a fantasy world. The problem is execution. The story reads as if it’s being written by someone with English as their second language or straight from voice diction. The characters have weak impressions and the story rambles around with events and character actions that don’t really make much sense. There are some redeeming qualities however as the author often avoids common tropes (through design or mistake I can’t tell) and takes time to go back and review his work. Best of all he keeps to his release schedule.
Synthetic Survivor: Machine Age
NaranNarman
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Thanks for the review :) yeah I find my execution of the story to be bad at most points but I try my best to review it and with help from my editor :) and yes I avoid common tropes as to not appear like any other novel which has a similar setting like mine. Do you plan kn reading the story still? I can assure you the quality will improve over time but if it doesn't fit your fancy, I respect
NaranNarman:Thanks for the review :) yeah I find my execution of the story to be bad at most points but I try my best to review it and with help from my editor :) and yes I avoid common tropes as to not appear like any other novel which has a similar setting like mine. Do you plan kn reading the story still? I can assure you the quality will improve over time but if it doesn't fit your fancy, I respect
Infiltration 5/5 has 2.8k words ;) and the upcoming new chapter will have 3.5k as I try to properly convey the major events in the story. Thank you for giving my story a chance
Yshlich:I plan on keeping it in my library to read once you have some more chapters.
NaranNarman:Infiltration 5/5 has 2.8k words ;) and the upcoming new chapter will have 3.5k as I try to properly convey the major events in the story. Thank you for giving my story a chance