Grammar is bad sentences and quotations are wrong text is hard to read the story is slow for some reason the mc tries to act 'normal' which isnt at all the author focuses too much on useless things pretty sure just to increase the word count the charachter is unlikable he hass too many mood swings he is also polite for no reason he also does nothing for himself and is only trying to show that he is normal and skips training in the first few chapters he also calls people with their clan name which is stupid the updating stability is good the author should try using grammarly i also use it for improving the grammar in my trash fanfic he also acts 'fake' he isnt very human like and people talking is awkward sorry for no qoutation marks and bad grammar i am using my phone.
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Going by this review it would make this novel seem impossible to read, so why is this rated four stars? Surely it should be much lower no?
